|Reviews for The Dream|
| Dark Endeavor 2/19/13 . chapter 3
Misty "What the heck?!"
Kira "No comment..."
Angel "Wow... Uhm do the out thing..."
Misty "The Dark Passions out... Now lets read!"
| RedRosePetal 2/13/13 . chapter 15
N'aw sad :( Poor Atem!
Great Job on the story I have really enjoyed this!
I am acutally going to favourite this, yeah there's a few minor mistakes here and there but hey I do the same thing. I have enjoyed the direction this story went so YAY! :D
| lilyflower666 2/13/13 . chapter 15
two chapters in two days, that's amazing, and kinda sad, cause now this story is over. ah, well i enjoyed reading it while it lasted. Midnight
| RedRosePetal 2/12/13 . chapter 14
-.- What is it with you and ending it by when the excitement builds! -.- XD
| lilyflower666 2/10/13 . chapter 13
that cliffy is positively criminal, but hey it keeps the readers coming back right?
| RedRosePetal 2/10/13 . chapter 13
Oh. Why! Bu- I- You- Wha- I HATE YOU! (JK) Why end it there! WHY! WAAAAAAH!
| RedRosePetal 2/2/13 . chapter 12
Why would you end it there. Meany. Wah.
| Guest 1/11/13 . chapter 9
This is pretty good, keep it up!
And as for to much angst, well these are heavy situations.
There are a few grammar mistakes here and there but the most noticeable is the absence of a question mark, you've just put a full stop or exclamation point.
I like the plot, it's intriguing - all though I though Mana and Mahad were shadow creatures at first(because they can shape-shift and all)
| fictionfanat 1/9/13 . chapter 10
Wow that was really unexpected... I love this story is great!
Hope u update it soon!
| RedRosePetal 1/11/13 . chapter 11
Ooooooooh I TOTALLY GET IT! HIS DREAM AND ATEM! OMG! I GET IT!
I want more now! Waaaah! That's unfair! I'm kidding it's fine I have assignments deadlines coming up as well so...
Atem needs a hug right now...
WHAT EVER YOU DO! DO NOT KILL ATEM'S MUMMY! I just thought of that.. Don't kill her! XP
| lilyflower666 1/10/13 . chapter 10
poor atem. he's dying and yugi can't know it's really him. but uh, don't you think a duel will give it away? i mean yugi is bound to notice the technique isn't he? Midnight
| lilyflower666 1/10/13 . chapter 2
oh, you SO speak my language.
| lilyflower666 1/10/13 . chapter 1
i've had worse dreams. since you liked my poems so much i thought i should return the favor and look at your stories. Midnight
| RedRosePetal 1/3/13 . chapter 10
Atem needs a hug.
Oi, you're turning into me again with these cliff hangers XD
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| RedRosePetal 12/27/12 . chapter 9
Are you turning in to me? Being mean to him! HA! My influence is rubbing off on you!
Can you update tomorrow. Please! I wanna know what happens next! OH! I know! Yugi will save him! Please. :( PLEASE!
Great Job! Update soon or I will eat your soul! HA! Just kidding ;P