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Well, I have to say this is some of the best writing I have seen on this site. Your writting style is so fluid, thats what I love about first person. You can really get in touch with how the characters feel and what they really thing. I love this story, and I can't wait for the next chapters. Thank you for your reviews, and yes, you can use both of my A.I. related stories for your site.
-Raven Erin

YEY ANOTHER CHAPIE! YOUHOUYOU! GO YOU!

this is one of the best fanfics i have ever read, a.i or no. it has made me want to watch a.i again, despite the fact that i've watched it at least about 4 times already. great writing style, moving dialogue, interesting characters (sister chiffon :P). please continue to update soon! i (and i am sure other readers too) are waiting for the following chapters to come...
you've made joe come to life in this story, and i think i could hear him speak out of my computer screen and feel his green-beryl eyes staring out of nowhere into nowhere. but although i like the way you portray his thoughts in his facial features/movements/speech, i wonder why you write that he was innocent and earnest...but maybe that was when he was "younger" and not seen too much of the evil of the world there. and being a mecha, he was built only for one purpose but still retained the gentle demanour of the man he was modelled after.
keep up the wonderful work and continue to bring the green-eyed mecha to life for readers...

This is probably my favourite "A.I." fiction on this site. I really like the snapshot style, it makes the stories more realistic somehow. I think Joe is espesially well written, staying true to his character in the movie. I would really like to see some more of these!

::chews on you:: Nifty! Well written, good points on "real" life (fanatically hypocritical Christians), in character Joe, and all sorts of other fun goodies (and I am loving the references). Yay for you.
JAZ

I have only just recently had the pleasure of viewing A.I. which I think is one of the best sci-fi movies in recent years. Of course like many other fans of the movie, my favorite character is Joe. So when I saw this fic I knew I had to read it. You are an extremely talented writer. You really hit on all the key points of Joe's personality. I could actually hear him talking in my head as I read your dialog. When I am able to find the time I will definately check out more of your fics as I patiently wait for you to come back and update this one. So until then...
Arrivederci,
~ JLV ~

This is great! I wish I could write like that, it seems like my way of thinking to myself- Cecie's narration, that is.
Keep the AI writing up!

YAY! YOU FINALLY UPDATED! Please update again soon! I love Cecie and Joe's relationship.

You are quite the little AI diva, aren't you? You'd enjoy my best guy friend Joe..he has a RIDICULOUS RIDICULOUS resemblance to Jude Law and..um..his name is Joe, so I always call him Gigolo Joe..of course, he rocked the AI costume at Halloween...anyway, GREAT STORIES! Please read my Signs ones sometime! :0

This is an elaborate and clever tale. I am glad I stopped by and took the time to cheack out your work and, knowing now it is part of a larger series of work, I will gave to read more. I like the smooth contrast of the religeous/philosophoical elements of the tale with the carnal aspects of life in Rouge and the observations about make about Jesus' assocations are perfect. You use a lot of subtle references and your "Easter Egg" notes make me wonder what else I missed.
Thank you.

I can't believe I didn't say anything before (I thought I did but apparently I didn't) Love your style of writing and I can't wait to hear more and Cecie and Joe! ^_^ This is great, plz keep it up!

That was a great story you know if you know the right people you can go into the movie buiessness.

GOOD LUCK ^_~

Very good I do think it seems sad that noone had ever given Joe a present,I hope you keep working on this one.You picked a very Christmassy chapter title,by the way don't worry about the Main Story title.

Another great chapter I am glad you decided to continue.Although this is a prequel to many of your other stories I think you should keep working on it since it often provides great background for your other stories.