please keep writing this story,is just so cute

Love the concept! Can't wait to read the rest :D

I love your story! It's sweet!

Awe poor Maka, I feel for her. This was a good chapter :) I look forward to the next update.

You definitely got me hooked into this story . It's an interesting concept to play around with, though, admittedly, I took it to be more metaphorical than literal. But, either way, it certainly shows promise, and I can't wait for Tsubaki to put Soul in his place. Nice work. :)

Love this :)

I can't really find the words to describe how much I like the premise of this story or the chapters thus far but I love this and I would really appreciate another chapter of your awesomeness!

please update soon this storys getting better and better cant wait for the next chapter bye! u

Soul must think she is crazy for crying :/
Keep it up! I really like this story!

Oh wow I like this. I like this VERY much.

Its pretty good.

Ooh poor Maka.. I can't wait to see how Tsubaki'll fix this.

I love this! Update soon please! I missed this story!

Oh wow poor Maka. Great chapter -so many feels. I hope things get better for Maka soon. Looking forward to the next installment!

please make more pleaseeeee i loved it