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| Reviews for The case of one shots |
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  El 10/27/12 . chapter 13 This is lovely, I so hope it could happen. |
 Hobygirl 10/25/12 . chapter 13Loved it love your work :) x |
| El 9/28/12 . chapter 11 Good, but I basically read Detective Lucas Hemingway and snorted/laughed. Hilarious! |
| El 9/24/12 . chapter 10 Really love these, but the bit that says awfully wedded wife made me laugh...it's lawfully. |
| ilove2dance 9/23/12 . chapter 10 This was great! I loved it :) |
| Hobygirl 9/23/12 . chapter 10 If only your Theory works that would be a good episode loved it xx |
| El 9/12/12 . chapter 9 I love your one-shots! |
| ilove2dance 9/12/12 . chapter 9 Loved this chapter, hope it happens like this in next weeks episode though I doubt it. Can't wait for Luc to come back! I'm so excited! This was great :) |
| Baibe 9/12/12 . chapter 9 Aww cute! I'm very excited about him coming back. Just a few mistakes I wanted to mention, incorrect English really frustrates me. 'There' is a place: over there, there is a horse. Or if you are welsh: by there, there is a horse. There are a few times when you used there but actually meant 'their' which is a belonging: their house, their hair, their phone. You get the picture, if they own it then it is theirs. And if you have a new hair do you are 'sporting' it not supporting it. I like your writing, please write more soon. |
| Fran 9/9/12 . chapter 8 Omg he should ride in on a horse whilst wearing armour or something! He should gallop on to the ward and punch max, hold his hand out to Eddi, wink, and say "my caravan's just outside." then swing her over his shoulder and gallop out the door. By the way, I like the one-shots. (it's fran27298) xx |
| Guest 9/9/12 . chapter 8 ok...So I would LOVE if this is what actually happens! Love the awkward staffroom bit..very Leddi! :D And yes, Luc does need a horse..and a whip! ;) |
| El 9/8/12 . chapter 7 This is so gorgeous I cant even put it into words. |
| Baibe 9/9/12 . chapter 8 That was really lovely but I must just mention a couple of things. I'm sorry I can't help it, I am the spelling and grammar police. Firstly (and a lot of people are guilty of this one, it's become a pet hate of mine) you're means you are, for example you're green. But your is the belonging version e.g. Is that your cat? If you are not sure which one to use remember to read you're as two words you are. The other thing is 'actually' it's got a t in it. Sorry to be condescending I hope you don't take the corrections the wrong way I just don't want your stories to be marred by incorrect English, I really enjoy your writing and I hope to read more of it soon. X |
| CeeBell 9/5/12 . chapter 7 best one yet xx |
| ilove2dance 9/6/12 . chapter 7 Really loved this chapter, it was great. |
