Awesome. I like how well they work together. Partners in every sense of the word. :)

Haha. Oh Ted. Always walking in on just the right moments. And I like how Dani's able to handle the two of them perfectly.

Ah, this works really well to bring them back together.

Loved the line: Now I don't know who gave this to you or why, but I've seen similar photos. They are moments taken out of context. They are not you – because I know you

More and more confrontations! Wow. This keeps getting more and more complicated.

Ah, his mind is so jumbled right now.

I'm glad that she understands where he's coming from here and is willing to do something to fix it.

Wow. That... was an intense showdown. And Dani has no idea what any of this is about.

I liked the image of Crews having to walk around his car three times before he was calm enough to get in. Something he would do.

I loved the paragraph about Crews' opposite characteristics. You had some great pairings of words there.

Good explanation about Bobby.

Heeee. I really love this chapter. How they worked together, understood each other. Finished each others sentences with a little role reversal. That revelation, though...

That was really sweet. I can sense that this is going to take an intense turn now, though.

Ha. Of course she painted it herself.

Hehe. He's so awkward when he's embarrassed. X'D

She's knocked over a lot of coffee, it sounds like. And I liked the backflash.