|Reviews for Immortal|
| MustangRider2 2/17/13 . chapter 9
oh my feels 3 one of the best stories of Newt i've read yet! you really captured the feelings and dialogues perfectly! :)
| Guest 1/13/13 . chapter 9
Asdfghjkl! I love this :D there are no words...
| Anonymous 1/10/13 . chapter 9
I like the different points of view here! When I read I tend to get stuck on one character, and this didn't let me do that, so I think I got more of the story. Also this scene/event was one of the ones I was most able to connect with in my head while reading the book, and it seems like we had a pretty similar vision :)
| Randomcat100 12/28/12 . chapter 2
I love this! I love Newt.
| shyyumi 10/30/12 . chapter 9
I completely understand the computer thing..I just got done my story for the Maze Runner books and I started it last year but never completed my first chapter until sunday cause of my computer! Computers are useful, but suck half the time lol. Anyways, great story keep writing! I missed Alby in the books and threw the book when he died, but felt bad for Newt and Minho as well. Now I feel bad for Alby and completely understand what he's going through. Nice job capturing their characters btw.
| theseaisblue 10/25/12 . chapter 8
Please update soon! Its sooo amazing
| theseaisblue 10/23/12 . chapter 7
Awwwww Please dont end it. If you do i will die
| DJfire 9/13/12 . chapter 1
thank you everyone! I really enjoyed all your comments. If you have any questions about my story please PM me! Or if you want to be a hater on my story PM me! Thanks again for reading!
| MustangRider2 9/3/12 . chapter 4
That was amazing :3 3
| Aidreanne-Now 9/3/12 . chapter 2
OMG! I love how you switched the characters and their POV, it's really good.
| Aidreanne-Now 9/3/12 . chapter 1
I really like this beginning. I just feel like you went to far ahead instead of giving more details.
| Guest 8/17/12 . chapter 4
Wow! I love this! Please update soon!
| Adorable Goth Chick 8/5/12 . chapter 3
i thought it was quite interesting
i never thought about how affaul it has to be in the glade i just thought suiside was a lost cause
| Adorable Goth Chick 7/31/12 . chapter 1
well so far love it!
| wingsforlife 7/31/12 . chapter 1
keep writing...i love the maze runner series, they are the best books ever.
i wish you wrote a litte bit longer, like it was rushed, but i still loved it. keep writing and update soon