oh my feels 3 one of the best stories of Newt i've read yet! you really captured the feelings and dialogues perfectly! :)

Asdfghjkl! I love this :D there are no words...

I like the different points of view here! When I read I tend to get stuck on one character, and this didn't let me do that, so I think I got more of the story. Also this scene/event was one of the ones I was most able to connect with in my head while reading the book, and it seems like we had a pretty similar vision :)

I love this! I love Newt.

I completely understand the computer thing..I just got done my story for the Maze Runner books and I started it last year but never completed my first chapter until sunday cause of my computer! Computers are useful, but suck half the time lol. Anyways, great story keep writing! I missed Alby in the books and threw the book when he died, but felt bad for Newt and Minho as well. Now I feel bad for Alby and completely understand what he's going through. Nice job capturing their characters btw.

Please update soon! Its sooo amazing

Awwwww Please dont end it. If you do i will die

thank you everyone! I really enjoyed all your comments. If you have any questions about my story please PM me! Or if you want to be a hater on my story PM me! Thanks again for reading!

That was amazing :3 3

OMG! I love how you switched the characters and their POV, it's really good.

I really like this beginning. I just feel like you went to far ahead instead of giving more details.

Wow! I love this! Please update soon!

i thought it was quite interesting
:3
yep
i never thought about how affaul it has to be in the glade i just thought suiside was a lost cause

well so far love it!

keep writing...i love the maze runner series, they are the best books ever.
i wish you wrote a litte bit longer, like it was rushed, but i still loved it. keep writing and update soon