This is absolutly amazing! I love it!

Whoooa!Oh man,the monster that's Remus i suppose,they didn't realise the depth of the attack!Seriously great job with the detailing here!

Very awesome so far! Very good story telling and really good translation! -

Oh wow!What a way to start this,very very story-book like but also really original!I love the atmosphere you could set up here,an ordinary life in every way until something happens!Sweet work with the thought and emotions here,especially Harriett's!