GAH where is part 2! :'(

Great story. Please add more.

This was a really good fanfic. It had a good structure and all that stuff, plus it was based on one of the series'. Excellent work!

I LOVE IT! IT'S PERFECT, I'M SOO GLAD SAKUYA

DIDN'T DISSAPEAR BECAUSE SHE SHOULDN'T HAVE!

PLEASE CONTINUE IT!

So, are they still in that dream world now, or are they in the real world? And why the sudden change in Ryoko and Ayeka's attitude. Don't get me wrong, it is pretty good.

this is horrible. the worst piece of writing that i have EVER read in my life. you should never write again. this is just a little advice if u no wats good for u.

YAY! Great ficcie! You left the characters w/ the same personality and it's Tenchi and Sakuya! My favorite Tenchi couple! KAWAII! You must continue with this ficcie! Oh and by the way, "Misataro" is such an awesome character! You should make another Tenchi fic with her in it! You could create a spin-off Tenchi series with her in it! That would be so cool! "Misataro" is officially my favorite extra, not part of the series character! YAY!

-chibisakura (e-mail me! _!)

good first fic. way not to go with the over used Tenchi/Ryoko pairing.

Hehe. I likes it a lot P Hope you write more Tenchi/Sakuya fics P

Why did you put him with her i mean she was just a shadow of yugi anyway. T/R FOREVER

washu's name is spelled with one U damnit. i couldn't help saying that. (washu's name is spelled with one U damnit was the stupidest fic ever)this was a great fic sakuya was the perfect girl for tenchi

Very much greatness (bows)

. Now THAT'S how the ep should've ended. I'm a hardcore Tenchi/Sakuya fan, and I think they make the kawaiiest couple. I dont get why people dont like Sakuya. she's like, one of my fave characters. One of my fave NON-main characters. I know, she was a little annoying at first but hey, I got used to her. Her and Tenchi's love for each other is so adorable. I wish I could read more Sakuya/Tenchi fics like this. It was great .

*BIG anime hearts in her eyes*

I LOOVED IT!

Tenchi/Sakuya forever!

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we need more tenchi/sakuya writers fans and fics i for one like them all even ryoko and tenchi but dont take that to seriously so people should read this and they will enjoy it unless there one of those pricks