|Reviews for 22 Not So Extensive Enterprises|
| moon 3/14/13 . chapter 2
I did not like it, the twin's would not conducted seprata meeting's they alway's conducted the meeting's too gever, they both like lady jay.
| Guest 3/14/13 . chapter 2
I did not like it, the twin's would not do separate meeting's they do the
| Karama9 8/31/12 . chapter 4
This drabble oozes weirdness... it's like a more adult version of an actual episode. I am curious to see where it's going, though...
| GuesT 8/31/12 . chapter 4
Must say... I found this one the best of all, awesome! Keep up the writting :)
| Hagan99 8/22/12 . chapter 3
These are great "drabbles" and a really interesting take on the backstory for the twins. I loved the last one the most- it was dark and so well thought out. The little details (colors for places in building, peppermint puffs) really made it. Can't wait for the next batch.
| Karama9 8/19/12 . chapter 3
This didn't feel nearly as long as you said it was. 15,000 words? Are you sure? Went pretty fast. :)
Nice adventure story, with the weirdest brotherly love ever mixing things up to a very interesting effect. It's nice to see the twins' beginnings.
| ranger-zenchi 8/18/12 . chapter 3
The twins are my favorite Cobra's. I'm loving these glimpses into their lives. This was a really interesting take on where the scar came from.
| Lady Jaye1 8/6/12 . chapter 2
Oddly enough, some of my online friends & I have joked about about a very similiar scenerio to this one. Very humorous chapter.
| Karama9 8/6/12 . chapter 2
That IS an extremely popular question, isn't it? I like your answer, very entertaining.
Nice mix of Renegades twins with the Sunbow ones, too. Things did get a bit confusing while the twins were talking to each other, but since we're kind of hearing it from the employees' point of view, it's quite excusable. Besides, the point is clear.
| Lady Jaye1 8/2/12 . chapter 1
Very enjoyable and well written story. The Crimson twins are probably my favorite of the Cobra characters, so I enjoy reading something like this.
| Karama9 8/2/12 . chapter 1
That's quite the drabble!
Seriously, that was an excellent character piece, showing great insight and very well written. If I had one small complaint, is that it dragged just a little bit in some places, belabored the point a little I guess.
Just the same, it was a great read. I love your take on the twins, especially how Zartan parallels the recent grievous injuries to the facial scar and how it is allowed to stay in its current form with no surgery or apparent attempt at reducing its appearance, and the conclusions he draws on the hidden part of the twins' dynamic. Adding Tomax' reaction to being told he IS different from his brother just makes it even better and more convincing.
I hope you don't let ten years pass before the next one. But, just a question, why is your objective 22? Symbolic? (Two 2s...) or something else?