*Jaw drops, tears filling it* No! This is the most immense amount of...just...x dybuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuuuuuuu
Sorry, that was me slamming my face on my keyboard, crying. You are a good writer. Keep it up. And write something happy with Cary, damn you!

This is depressing, but well-written and way different from the usual "fluff" stuff here. Good work.

This is good, but you've said that Cary is barely fourteen. His gravestone dates that you've written beg to differ.

Oh wow this was great but sad too. Well done :)