|Reviews for Connecting The Dots|
| LuckyLadybug 11/20/12 . chapter 12
What an intense finale! The scene on the ship is so vivid, the terror so real. And I love the reappearance of the old man. :)
I think that's the first time I've heard of Russian roulette being played with an actual roulette wheel instead of a gun.
I figured out Kolchak would use blood before it actually happened! I'm guessing the wound had to be real in order for the blood on the painting to be real and seal the portal, but owwww! Poor Kolchak!
I love how you go back to the original dream from the beginning and have Kolchak put what he's learned to good use. I would have liked to have seen one more mention of Tony, but regardless, this was a very good ending.
Excellent, exciting story! Kolchak's voice is perfect all the way through, as are the other characters' when they appear. I look forward to reading more.
| LuckyLadybug 11/20/12 . chapter 11
Oh, Tony, I love you. Best part of the chapter. :)
LOL, Ms. Hoyt's reaction to being asked how she's slept lately.
And yay, Kolchak has saved the world from another copy of the dangerous painting! Now, for the real thing.
| LuckyLadybug 11/20/12 . chapter 10
Ha, I love the grouchy people Kolchak keeps running into in your stories! ;) This is a very intriguing chapter, as pieces start to come together. So Kolchak's had the painting on his camera and that's been causing the problems for him. And there's the possibility of controlling one's dreams. That always makes a fun topic for stories.
LOL. Poor Tony. I can just imagine his expression when he comes in and sees and smells the mess. I love the image of Kolchak plopping on Tony's couch, too.
| LuckyLadybug 11/20/12 . chapter 9
Aww, I love Kolchak's protectiveness of Miss Emily. And LOL, his musing about lawyers shingling a roof.
I get definite reminder vibes for the doppelganger episode with Kolchak forcing himself to stay awake like that. I love how Tony's worried about him! The banter is wonderful, as always. I think my favorite part is about sleeping in the suit. And when Tony says "And that is good news, how?" I can just picture his bewildered look. LOL.
| ShadowCub 8/23/12 . chapter 9
Good ol ipso facto,lol.
I could just see him talking to Tony and the look on Tony's face.
| ShadowCub 8/19/12 . chapter 7
Kinda sounds like the episode where the spirit kills people.
They see it and it kills them but the actual person is somewhere else.
| ShadowCub 8/15/12 . chapter 6
Damn I love Ms. Emily!
| ShadowCub 8/8/12 . chapter 4
"They're waiting in the over-flow waiting room," LMAO!
Poor Carl nothing but bad luck.
| ShadowCub 8/6/12 . chapter 3
Damn I have creepy dreams like this all of the time!
| ShadowCub 8/6/12 . chapter 1
Is this Dark Shadows (the Old House)?
And Loomis sounds like someone from Salem's Lot.
All in all sounds great.