"Dad, Dad." Said Booby as he rode up and stopped before the four men. Probably my favorite typo yet. Still, a good story and does have a good point as well.

this was great kind of like a real episode, but i love the message conveyed in the story

That was excellent and bluntly true.

Wow...just...wow, this story seems to explain very well of what's going on in the world today, that's what a lot of shows lack. Shows like Family Guy, South Park, The Simpsons, etc. Need to discuss these issues with the viewers and try to get them understand the seriousness of what's really going on in this world.