mke a sequel it would be cute

Haha cute, but the centering of the text was kind of bothersome, and you should capitalize the first letter of those sentences and such, but it was pretty good. Maybe continue the story?

hey ur awesome at writing! i love beauty pop plz make more! unless u already have... anyway AWESOME STORY.

I like it a lot! I enjoyed reading you fic, but you have to fix the way you type. You should used align left, not center. Readers will be more comfortable. And after the quote mark, please always use capitalized letter hehe XD
Please write more! X3