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Sami 5/20/13 . chapter 13
Modern day, Japanese people.
I already made one about Americans, but I'm only 11, so I'm not the best writer…
By the way, what stuff is on this website? I know you can read stories and write them, and you can review, but is there more?
Sami 5/20/13 . chapter 13
Haha, I won't. ;)
Okay, how about May 31st?
Sami 4/28/13 . chapter 12
Yeah, thanks, you did help!
And the next update should probably be before May 30th…That's enough time.
Quizazz is a really good website for reading stories, writing stories, taking quizzes, making quizzes, taking polls, or making polls. If you have an account, you can do a lot of different things.
And, for the story, I actually haven't posted it yet. I'm still trying to figure out the backstories for a few of the characters. But once I do post it, I PROMISE I will send a link.
This chapter was really good-I liked that it went into their thoughts. I thought it was him who liked her!
Keep doing well! :)
Sami 4/24/13 . chapter 11
Update in 5 days or face the consequences.
:/
You don't want to know what they are…
Moonlight Willows 4/16/13 . chapter 1
This is a very great start! ;) I'm going to read the rest very soon. However I wouldn't think that the program would start that early since it starts in the future around say 2003?2008? But I love it nonetheless.
Sami 3/28/13 . chapter 11
Ignore the second review-I thought the first one (the long one) hadn't loaded.
Sami 3/28/13 . chapter 11
Ignore the second review-I thought the first one (the long one) hadn't loaded. :)
Sami 3/28/13 . chapter 11
The next one is April 29th!

And don't worry-the chapter was great! As soon as you said he liked climbing, I had a feeling that he would be surprised by someone sneaking up behind him and fall off.
Are you sure you want to read my story? Thanks. I'll try not to make it too horrible. :)
Anyway, great job! I can't think of anything to say to help you improve on anything-sorry! I guess I'll come up with something next time. I gotta go! Bye!
Sami 3/28/13 . chapter 11
For the deadline, how about…let's just stick with April 29th. One month and a day is PLENTY of time.
Actually, I shouldn't say that-I haven't updated one of my stories on Quizazz for about 2 months…
Are you sure? My story isn't the greatest ever…But thanks! 3 I might get it finished at the end of April-it takes me a long time with homework and other stories and chores and siblings and all that.
Anyway, the chapter was great! When I heard about how he liked climbing, I guessed that his death would be someone scaring him from behind and him falling. I thought the 'killer' would say something like,"Too easy."
But I think your death for him was best. I think that you're doing a great job! I'm trying to think of something helpful to say other than just,"Good work, keep it up", but it's just that good! :)
I have a question-it can be answered in the next update. If you're from Japan, and you have 2 children, don't you have to pay, like, a ton of money? How much? And how does it all work? My question might not make much sense…
The reason I'm asking this is because I have 2 pairs of siblings in the class. I'm thinking about making one poor and one with an average amount of money.
Don't worry-the chapter was great. :D
Sami 3/24/13 . chapter 10
Your deadline for updating this story is Easter. O_O
And my mom's birthday is today! :)
I tripped on the open dishwasher and dropped her cake. T-T I wanted to eat it…
My younger brother's birthday is on April 29th. Can you update before then?
Lucca 3/15/13 . chapter 5
Well,i didn't expected that... lol
Lucca 3/15/13 . chapter 4
I can't stop reading this fanfic! It is so amazing! I think that Erisa is not a killer,maybe She is not a bad girl,She is just too insecure.
Lucca 3/15/13 . chapter 1
Well i loved this chapter. I really love Battle Royale and you is Very good at because i am not a native English speaker,but i Hope that you keep the good work! good luck!
Sami 3/10/13 . chapter 10
I definitely will read them! :)
I'm not sure-at first, I thought Erisa would win, and I still do. But after he said that she would also lose, I have this feeling that the smart Erisa will almost win, be one of the final 2, and then die. Maybe then she'll say something like,"It was so close. Yet, so far away," or something like that. I dunno.
You're doing great! I'm writing a Battle Royale story, too, but I won't lie-yours is about 10 times better. Please update soon! :)
Wait-how many characters are left? I forget… :O
Sami 3/5/13 . chapter 9
Review, please update! :)
Okay, so…

Storyline- 10/10
Description- 5/5
Characters- 4.5/5

Total- 20/20

The characters is 4.5/5 because they die as soon as you meet them, unless they're one of the main few characters-Daisuke (wasn't that his name? I can't remember names…), Ruriko, and Erisa, for example.
I'm not the best reviewer, though, so…
Sorry that this review wasn't detailed, and that I couldn't write more. I gotta go. :) Bye!
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