Please update soon...

And please write more story about keima and kanon...
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am i asking too much?
anyway, good job writing this chapter...

LO AME *w*

so funny!

whayhay. finaly keima is free from the playboy role.

I am a big fan of TWGOK fanfics, and , for a first chapter, this is one of the best I've read

not so special. Roberto name iS So out of place, and all of cast is Ooc. Sorry to be honest

I'm not gonna lie.

My first thought was "Oh god, get some line breaks in here ASAP!"

Then I started trying to read, and my second thought was "Oh god, what's with all the run-on sentences?"

In more helpful terms, neither the ENTER key nor the period key on you keyboard represent rare overpowered items, please use them every time there's a reason to!

Moving on...you'll need a better grasp of Keima's character. If something occurs that's erroneous, he uses LOGIC, not a flustered high school boy reaction. I'm sorry, but his reaction to Kanon not forgetting about their date is about unbelievable as it's going to get.

I'm going to skip commenting on Roberto.

I want to point out that as an author, it's your job to explain stuff, and not leave things out! If needed, summarize the darn thing. The author's note in the middle was simply redundant, irrelevant, and potentially distracting.

Trivia: "Zeusu no burēdo wa kaminari" actually translates to "Zeus' Blade is Lightning".

what good fantasy ya got there lov it

Interesting story. This one made me laugh real hard and I wonder how can Keima get out of this in one piece. Anyways, just try your best not to get Keima killed by crazy Kanon fans in the finale chapter.