I dont blame clover or curtis...they didnt seem to have much to look forward to and if giselle or victoria were in the blast...thats alright

I love this Fanfic, but I need a good name for a prince because I'm writing a fanfic but the prince's name sounds weird.

I really liked this chapter. she finally saw christian again. and i feel sort of bad for curtis and clover, but they deserve it. please update soon

Your story is addictive :3 it's amazing! I hope we see something of Ebonys' brother, I think an unexpected visit from him would be great! And I wonder what Curtis and Clovers next trick will be and who the guy in full masquerade was :D (sorry, as you can tell, I'm just a little bit excited by all this)

keep looking!

I love how fast you are updating. Dewey is hilarious.

I had wondered what delightful things were going to happen when Dewey showed up. Pity her sister Giselle dumped him on Ebony and that she, in turn, was unable to glean from him the location of her charming prince. I do hope she is able to meet up with him in the next chapter.

No, no wander, shell divert his attetion to you!

niko is the boy from the lantern show? on the top of the tower?

yay the ball. it all sounds really awsome. i loved this chapter. who called her? please update soon you made me really curious

OMG! where is the rest of this story...ive become addicted...GIVE ME MORE !

Really good, i like u shouldnt offer faster stuff, just say the truth, that you write to hear from a reader who can connect with the story.I like how the stepsisters are not ugly, but they also arent typical mean girls because they never do anything purposefully to harm her. I know people like that, i cant stand their sfupidity and shallowness because people like them for it . I dont respect somebody better than me at something when i know they act more immature than me and only care about then again, isnt that what i do? The irony of himan nature.

what were they whispering about?
i don't like it and i'm afraid for ebony now.
but i'm also really excited about the ball.
more soon please...

Yay theyre there. and poor ebony everybody picks on her. whats wrong with these people i really love your story so please update again

I have been waiting for the balls ever since I read 'a take on Cinderella'. Which was when this was first posted. You're a terrible tease.

Everything seems to be going well for Ebony; that usually only means trouble. Or worse, Dewey.

JImli XD