please update soon!

WOW Loved this chapter! Surprising twist with V being pregnant. Definitly cannot wait until the next update.

After all that the baby still survived, that just shows how strong the baby is just like its parents. Great chapter!

I am happy that they finally found Veronica and I am happy that she is pregnant something to bring she and Logan closer together. As for Piz and Gory thet are both assholes ad deserve whatever is coming to them. I can't wait for the next chapter

Phew! Great that V has been rescued and big baby news... I thought the last comment was funny "And your still alive?" though Keith being smart he does know L would marry V any day of the week...

Poor Veronica...missing for 2 months already! Hope they find her soon!

Good chapter, really moves the story along. Sounds like they were getting close to catching up to Piz & Gory, though maybe not now since they're planning on relocating to Las Vegas. Looking forward to the next update...

Ooh, the plot thickens! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Well I am happy that Mac remembered the conversation that she heard Gory and Piz having and that girl Emily talked to the sheriff's department and hopefully they will find Veronica and get her home safe with her family and Logan so she can enjoy being engaged to the love of her life

Great chapter!

Can't wait to see what happens next! Engaging story.

In response to your request for readers' input re: amount of detail needed to describe Veronica's ordeal in captivity...I think you set the scene very well when you described Gory punching V in the face. It was a violent unprovoked attack that showed the readers what Gory is capable of and what he is willing to do. I don't think you need to go into detail about the further abuse V will be undergoing - maybe a short flashback as V regains conciousness. Let your readers' imaginations fill in the blanks.

I would have V go through a little but maybe use it as flashbacks with her telling Keith and Logan. Awaiting the update.

If you are worried about showing what Veronica goes through then you can always use flashbacks when she recounts her story to Logan and Keith. I love the story.

Well at least everyone knows who has Veronica I always hated Piz's character on the show so when they do find Veronica I hope that Logan gets to take his shot at both of them. I hope that you don't have Veronica go through to much damage and Logan and Keith can find her.

I LOVE the deal Leo makes with Logan giving him a crack at Piz & Gory when they arrest them. Great idea & really syncs with Leo's character. I also really like how Piz is a badie in your fics. Good stuff. Good update! I hope you don't beat Veronica up too badly, though she can't escape unscathed either, IMO.