|Reviews for final destination destination unkown|
| Wesfanemt333 9/17/12 . chapter 1
Your chapters are very short. And three chapters should be separated. That's why they have the chapter system. It's interesting, and your spelling looks pretty good. When I write, I try to make my chapters at least 1,000 words, if not more. More is better, when it comes to description. Emotions are also good.
| Guest 8/10/12 . chapter 1
love the concept of the train crash the chapters are short but dont let that get you down