Ookaay, the Colgate and Crest story was confusing me.

Actually the way they destroyed the wraith is accurate and is one of my favorite ways to destroy them in the games because it is a major weak spot

Lol, hilarious, I hope to see more Colgate vs. Crest later. You'r stories are great, with pretty good descriptions and grammar. Just have to organize your thoughts a little better and make it a little easier to comprehend all of this humor. Other than that, great chappy!

Hehehe. This story is certainly unique, and over all quite funny. Please keep writing!

i love this story, also wolud you like a oc?

Well...Equestria is saved. Halcyons can take a fuckton of plasma damage and keep going, plus their MACs are big and strong. Besides, since they're responding to an alien message, there's probably Spartans.

"He who allows the alien to live shares in the crime of its existence"

Fairly decent. I don't think the Apples could swear that much though, and the story is a bit rambly, and disorganized. However it is pretty funny, I found myself laughing when Derpy turned out to be a genius. 9 out of fifteen stars, and hope for more later!

i've actually read chapter two and it seems nice just a bit too childish for what i was thinking

I'm definitely going to enjoy this story; both watching it progress as I beta-read it and seeing the readers' feedback for the assuredly crazy shit that's going to go down.

Short and I don't think that a covenant Brute would act like an internet trolling asshole. (But it is super lols) And I lolled at the warp thing. It is slipspace

Good story but its slipspace not warp.

Looks good!

Nice idea