The script writers need to take a few notes from how you do things. Great work! I love the love moments between David and Millie!

Another great story! Nice!

AWESOME JOB! I love it! Despite being a boy and all, I kinda have a heart for romance stories. At least they have nice endings.

Anyway, great job! I love the whole thing between Millie and David! They really do love each other!

Marie, you always surprise me by adding little snippets of sex at the end of your fics. That aside, this whole fic was charming. I could instantly feel the warmth and atmosphere of Wei Ki Ki as I read. I am kinda jelous now, I wanna go to Hawaii!

Awesome work!