Great chapter! I really love your descriptive narration. The first two paragraphs did wonders as far as dragging me in to read more. Good interpretation of characters. Really nice work.

When it comes to Mud and Valeshipping...I like both, but I prefer the latter more. But I digress, loved it so much, thank you for this amazing work.

Overall, a very good story. While I'm very glad that my favorite pairing ended up being the one, it was a well written story either way. Good job.

...And it's over.
*claps hands* Well, Droory, this story was amazing. Garet was being a moron (as usual :P), Felix was being overprotective (as usual :P) Piers was being sort of a "counselor" for Jenna, Ivan and Sheba were a laughingstock, but also had their sweet moments like at the end (I'll get to that in a second), Jenna and Mia were trying to get Isaac, fought, and eventually made up, ...and Isaac. He was in love with both Mia and Jenna, wanted Mia more, then wanted Jenna more, then wanted Mia more, then wanted Jenna more... I felt like everyone was characterized well, and that you captured their personalities. The story was very fun to read, and I looked every day for a new chapter.
Now... the Jupiter Adepts. *0* I laughed almost every chapter at their antics, and smiled at their sweet moments. Now, that one at the end... I really liked it. It was really cute, and it was a good last scene for them. I'm looking forward to your next fic about them, and (hopefully) an epilogue for this one!
Great job, Droory. It was a wild ride. :D

i just love this story

Well, this was what I thought personally was an unexpected ending! I was actually thinking more along the lines of... well, I'm not really sure. But I loved it every step of the way

Windshipping, woo! Yay for Sheba and Ivan! I've always thought they were perfect for each other Well, because... nah, no because. They just are.

Mudshipping isn't all that bad, now that I think about it (UH UH STILL A LOYAL VALE PEEP... eh hem, yeah). It's actually kind of sweet, but I still think fiery calm always makes things more fun and interesting Mia and Isaac... even if I still won't completely "vote" for it, nor will I say I like it, but it's... alright, to say the least. Yup.

I can say the same thing for flame.

For Dusk, honestly I've never really thought about it. But it's cute, yeah, cute! I liked the little scenes between Felix and Karst, even if they weren't meant to be exactly "romantic". I feel since they are both kind of cold when you first encounter them, if they were slowly to become a couple, it'd kind be like... I dunno, they would warm up to each other unlike how they would with others? OMG FAILUREEEEE!

Would you believe it if I said I kind of scanned the ending with Jenna and Isaac instead of fully reading it? Yeah, it's true! I actually feel like I'm in the situation and so it's like looking away in a sense, I'm not a super mushy mushy person, I feel like I would laugh, in a good way, ya know?

All in all, it was a very lovely story, I can't think of anyone who could portray this much feeling into his/her writing and make it seem like the characters are real. Thus, I congrats you! /claps

I feel like I should write/say more, but I don't know what to say.

Heh, I might ask you for a personal epilogue you could possibly send through private message.

OMG WHAT TO SAYYYYY. Unfortunately I reviewed to all chapters so I can like, a year from now review to this randomly again and say it was awesome. Maybe I shouldn't have reviewed to chapter eleven... darn you fanfiction!

I almost feel bad for Mia.
Almost.
She should get a medal of ultimate kindness.
Seriously.
Yeah.

NO DROORY WHY YOU LEAVE MEEEEEEE!
/trying to imitate you by chuckling

CHUCKLE CHUCKLE CHUCKLE.

...

CHUCKLE.

Great way to end a review, huh?

Hey, sorry I've been gone for a while! I've been really busy for this week, homework, essays, and stuff like that, and I don't really have a lot of time to type this, but me, I like morbid things sometimes. The gore showed that this wasn't just a empty lighthouse like you see in TLA (in DD though, my gosh have you played it to the eclipse part? I have, and it was just really dark... metaphorically and literally) that's just filled with monsters. You actually put the deceased, haha! Well, I actually liked this chapter. I'm going to be really sad when it's over, but we should smile, because it happened, you know! But yeah... I can't wait for the next chapter

Awww, it's almost over? Dang.
Okay, so here's what I thought. Maybe there was a little too much gore at the beginning... and most of the chapter held a very somber mood. Although I think the mood was necessary, I think you would have done well with less gore. It seems that Ivan and Sheba want everyone to get along... and Jenna and Mia did. The Doom Dragon fight was good-I liked how Isaac and Felix figured out what the Wise One did. I wonder what the rest of the team's reactions will be like...
You should definitely write an epilogue.

Really good. Cannot wait to finish the last one.

Not a pretty chapter with all this blood. I am glad that no one of the 8 died. I liked that you included Karst. I would not mind a Karst & Felix pairing. Its nice that Mia and Jenna is starting to get on friendly terms. If you ask me you should not make an epilogue. One chapter is more than enough to conclude everything. I just want this over with.

I beg you to end this story with mudshipping. It would be cruel and unfair to break Mias heart at this point. She has done nothing wrong.

Very good. Keep up the hard work and I look forward to the next chapter.

AAAAARRRRGGGGGHHHHHHHH! SO CLOSE TO THE END! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! (Don't actually tell me, though...:P)

Okay, a game! Here we go...
What I want to happen:
Isaac will make up with Jenna, with Mia being all understanding and okay with it, because she will end up with Garet. Ivan and Sheba will develop a growing relationship (like all couples) and eventually consider themselves girlfriend/boyfriend. Felix and Isaac will start to get along a little bit, and then Jenna (you know how she is) will find a way to get them to be friends. Piers (because he's all trustworthy and stuff) will be confided in by everyone (not all at once!) with their problems and they will eventually get past all their differences and consider the rest of the team as friends. Garet will do something stupid with the cannon.
X_X
SO MUCH STUFF. I just want everyone to be happy.

"Wondering how it's gonna end? Man, that must suck. "

YOU DON'T KNOW EXACTLY EITHER. I'M SURE OF IT. HEHE.

Yeah, it was. I personally think the Isaac and Mia thing at the end needed a bit more... "spark"? It just seemed like a stereo-type girlfriend and boyfriend sweet "I'm always there for you" moment, if you ask me. Though it was nice.

I felt the Jenna and Garet thing was the nicest moment, it had the humor road as most people in real life try to take when trying to cheer someone up.

I'm sure you know what I want. The shipping starts with a V.

For Flame? ...ehhh... when you take a normally "stupid" person and a normally "fiery and easily annoyed" person and put them in a lovey-dovey relationship, it doesn't necessarily end well all the time (it does sometimes though).

Wind? I don't care. But it'd be nice (Ivan is a bit to flirty in this story than what I got from him in the story, but oh well).

Vale... oh mer gerd I so wish it so. I would love you forever if you did, but it's your story.

Mud. No, mud will dry up eventually, whether it's now or later. Mwahaha, taking real life situations. Kinda.

OMG TO MAKE SOMEONE DIE THAT'S NOT A PART OF THE EIGHT ADEPTS WOULD BE COOL.

But in this situation, at the moment, unless things clear up I think Isaac shouldn't belong to anyone at all.

POOR PIERS. YOU SHOULD ADD HIM MORE IN THE STORY. SERIOUSLY.

This is a sweet chapter indeed. I like the mudshipping and flameshipping moment. Mia is such a nice and sweet girl. :)

I want your story to end with mudshipping, flameshipping and windshipping. Mia is the girl Isaac need with her personality. This is the most happy ending you can get in my opinion. Jenna will have her parents in addition to Garet. Mia on the other hand has no one but Isaac to make her really happy.

I want all 8 adepts to survive the final battle. Even the bi***ch Jenna does not deserve to die even if I totally detest her.

I can also accept a ending with Isaac with no Mia and Jenna as his girlfriend.

The only ending I cant accept is valeshipping. My heart hurts and I feel like vomiting.

I hope my wish will come true. I will soon find out. Until next time! :)

The characters seem to have become more solid. At least now I'm not doing a double-take every couple of paragraphs because a character was having a personality shift.

I don't understand why Felix, who is normally quiet and stern, would suddenly start ranting about his expectations of Isaac and his sister's love life. It seemed a little out of place. Why would Felix pause long enough to explain all his feelings on the matter? He seemed a bit too angry for that. And why would he tell Isaac what he felt in the first place? Felix seems to be the type of guy who would just string Isaac up from the crow's-nest without any reasons other than that Isaac disobeyed orders. Then Felix would proceed to privately mull over his disappointment over Isaac's lack of fidelity.

I liked how you set up Isaac's plight. I really feel sorry for him, and feel disappointed in him as well. It's a good combination for this situation.

Thanks for writing this. It's a fun read. Hope you keep going to the end!