At the beginning it was hard for me to understand all the story and a little bit strange. But then I was carried away in the quest. Well done.

Hey! This is great! You've done a great job of bringing every creature to life in a way that's believable and entertaining. I enjoyed reading it very much!

Hi urm, I know this is a bit demanding of me, but there's a bit too much Helen and Nikki stories on this forum and I would prefer to read other stories like femlash / disasters / others because they're not really my favourite characters. This fantasy was ok-ish.