|Reviews for Loyalty|
| Lynnp 12/24/12 . chapter 1
Oh wow, not sure how I missed this one! I know you wrote it a while ago, but I do hope you are going to continue as it's really got my attention!
| kal 8/7/12 . chapter 1
uh oh...trouble's brewing! looking forward to the next chapter!
| Mathisblu 8/7/12 . chapter 1
Loved this first chapter. Your description of character are good and little details as color and clothes are nicely done it help to see images of what you mean as a setting for all actions to come.
Introducing Robert the way you did is cleverly put on! I can't wait to read more and what a cliffhanger!
Thanks for this interesting story.
| darkin520 8/3/12 . chapter 1
Oh, what an intriguing start from the beginning! I love that the four women and Lucas are in England while Nathan and Michael are on seaQuest. I love that Michael is working on the maglev (but it's too bad he can't implement Kit's ideas :P). But, wow...I love the idea right from the start where Freya has felt Robert. :O That whole scene was just so well done. And I very much enjoyed the banter between the characters, especially Freya and Kit. And I love the little scene with Michael and Nathan...that was cute. And then you throw us for a loop with that cliffhanger. I can't wait to see what happens. This is totally awesome! I loved it, and I love you. :D