Oh wow, not sure how I missed this one! I know you wrote it a while ago, but I do hope you are going to continue as it's really got my attention!

Lynn
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uh oh...trouble's brewing! looking forward to the next chapter!

Loved this first chapter. Your description of character are good and little details as color and clothes are nicely done it help to see images of what you mean as a setting for all actions to come.

Introducing Robert the way you did is cleverly put on! I can't wait to read more and what a cliffhanger!

Thanks for this interesting story.

Oh, what an intriguing start from the beginning! I love that the four women and Lucas are in England while Nathan and Michael are on seaQuest. I love that Michael is working on the maglev (but it's too bad he can't implement Kit's ideas :P). But, wow...I love the idea right from the start where Freya has felt Robert. :O That whole scene was just so well done. And I very much enjoyed the banter between the characters, especially Freya and Kit. And I love the little scene with Michael and Nathan...that was cute. And then you throw us for a loop with that cliffhanger. I can't wait to see what happens. This is totally awesome! I loved it, and I love you. :D