|Reviews for The Best Laid Plans|
| nobody important 5/16/13 . chapter 11
Really touching chapter and so brillantly written great job
P.S. can u throw in some more mash chatecters like Radar and klinger and it would be great to see how ole FRANK reacted to this
| Harry Albus Potter Dumbledore 4/26/13 . chapter 11
I totally love the interaction between Trapper and Hawkeye. I really wished this had happened in the television series. Update, please.
| Sapphire Dawn 4/22/13 . chapter 11
Glad they are together to get thought this. I sure hope trapper is able to keep his promise to his daughter and keep them away from Ken and his ex-wife.
| jinxcat21 4/21/13 . chapter 11
After no proper good-bye, an Army SNAFU, and your story "Saying Good-bye", i am not surprised the two had a fight right off the bat. :)
Nice reference to the episode "Bombed".
Damn, you made me cry with this chapter! Just means you're a good writer, though, so I can't hate you 3
| Random Punster 4/21/13 . chapter 11
Regarding your author's note at the end: drafting anything related to MASH in advance is a terrible idea, it'll just rebel and wind up with a drinking problem.
Regarding the actual chapter itself, as expected it turned out fantastically. You did manage to combine the dual plots of Trapper discovering Hawkeye is still alive with the child abuse issue very well, giving both a fair amount of attention without hindering the other. That said, there is still a lot of catching up Trapper and Hawkeye have to do...if/how you're going to play that particular tidbit out, I'm not sure, but I am sure that this story has just gotten a lot more interesting (not that it wasn't before, but I'm just imagining Trapper meeting BJ, or discovering that the "Boston Ferret Face" actually was at MASH 4077 and knew Hawkeye).
It's actually kinda funny, but I was watching the episode of MASH where Trapper and Margaret got trapped in the supply tent the other day (wonder why :) ). Also, incidentally, I've already gotten a compliment for my new hat, which I figured you'd appreciate.
Here's hoping your life hasn't been too crazy the past couple of days.
See you soon!
[Not so] Random Punster
| Sarai 4/20/13 . chapter 11
| Fawn Hickory 4/20/13 . chapter 11
This one made me cry too. But I liked this chapter a lot. Can't wait for more.
| Guest 4/20/13 . chapter 11
Brilliant way to explain why we never heard from trapper again.
| ImaLateBloomer 4/20/13 . chapter 11
This is a wonderfully written chapter. It's so good to see Hawkeye and Trapper reunited.
| Hazmatt 4/20/13 . chapter 11
Incredible chapter! Very intense and emotional! I hope everything works out! I look forward to reading more! Is Trapper going to see Margaret, so he can truly see what Hawkeye was talking about?
| yenyen76 4/20/13 . chapter 11
Loved it! Nice explanation for the lack of contact from Trap.
| Hazmatt 4/3/13 . chapter 10
Incredible chapter! Those poor girls! What happened to them was horrible, especially Becky!
I had a feeling who her Dad would be when she started talking about him and where he was from, and then with their names, all I could think was "Oh God, these are Trapper's little girls, someone hurt his girls", then to have it confirmed, I can't imagine what was going through his mind after he got Becky's call!
Why did he stop visiting? Was he ordered to do so, or did he think that they didn't want to see him? I hope everything works out!
Will Margaret be able to help Becky get past the awful things Ken did to her?
How do Hawkeye and Trapper react to seeing each other again, especially when Hawkeye has to deliver such horrible news? I look forward to reading more!
| Hazmatt 4/3/13 . chapter 9
Wonderful chapter! I really enjoyed it! The ending was perfect!
| Hazmatt 4/3/13 . chapter 8
Incredible chapter! That so sad! I'm glad I had Kleenex nearby! Very emotional! Poor Margaret and Hawkeye and poor baby Adrienne! That had to be so hard and hearing BJ's news would have just made it harder! I hope everything works out as well as possible given the situation!
| Hazmatt 4/3/13 . chapter 7
Amazing chapter! Very intense! I hope the twins will be okay! I really enjoyed it! I hop everything works out!