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che
2009-08-24 . chapter 1
wow. this is written so beautifully! and i was listening to nightwish whilst reading it, which had a kind of epic effect on me...now i think i'm too dazed to say anything coherent. this is awesome!
retroes
2009-08-10 . chapter 1
What can I say, with "Hometown Glory" from Adele in the background, this story had me sniffling. You write beautiful stories ( I've yet to go trough all of them), but up to now, this is definitely my favorite.

I love the pacing, and the motive of the thick snow falling around Draco & Ron, as it lets them seem far off the others, in their own little world, at least for that little Hogsmeade visit.

I was at first bit puzzled that Ron got a dragon instead of a snake, but now, after reading, it seems just fine to me.

Also, I first cringed a bit when the "I love you" came; it threatened this awesome, 'real' feeling story to become horribly sappy at the end, but you tip-toed around that just fine with the last "Run" part. That rounded all up so nicely!

Well, sorry if I'm not totally clear here, I'm still a bit in Awe, you see ;D
Utena-Puchiko-nyu
2009-07-28 . chapter 1
I like it.

Kisses from Argentina!
smaginn
2009-06-28 . chapter 1
You have written a deeply beautiful story of a pairing I - to be honest- can't see happening. I saw it happening here- and my goodness, you have a knack of writing. Yes- Ron is IC, Draco- well he said he was changing didn't he? And at the same time, he is still the cocky, ever so full of himself Draco Malfoy. While I- personally don't see the chemistry- you have done your absolute best to convert me- and if I didn't want Draco to myself, I think I might- almost- become a fan of Ron/Malfoy. And that's saying quite a lot. x Smaginn
skinnyrita
2008-09-23 . chapter 1
SQUE *scrumbles*
IcePrincess91
2008-02-12 . chapter 1
i just read this and dont judge a book by its cover on ur other page and i must say there both amazing and i hope u keep up the great work oh i wanted u 2 know im putting u on my fav authors list...:D
JaceDamian23
2007-08-06 . chapter 1
Draco sighed and turned theatrically to the witch. "All right, all right...I'm afraid you'll have to take off the dancing ferrets and the bit that says 'Property of Draco Malfoy, Do Not Touch on Pain of Death.'" The witch laughed; Ron tried to figure out if he was being serious or not.

lmfao. that is funny. poor ron, he actually believed him hee


in the middle of erasing some errant line, the witch looked up and frowned at him. "If you're just going to stand there and fidget, go take your clothes off and lay down. I'll be with you in a minute." She pointed at one of three tables lined up against one wall, upholstered with patched green leather.

Draco smirked indecently. "Yeah, Weasley, go take your clothes off."

"Oh, shut up."

I loved that part LOL


"Well? Did they meet your approval, Master?" Ron asked, watching him.

Draco smirked. "Of course. Call me that again."

"What, 'Master'?"

"M..." He stopped unbuttoning his shirt long enough to run his fingertips across Ron's exposed back, tracing loose circles over the spot to be marked. Ron shivered. "Careful, Weasley, I may get used to hearing that."

"In your dreams, Malfoy."

haha dracos so cocky hehe i love it


aw a dragon for ron?so cute..though draco got a lion surprised ron didnt get a snake for slytherian LOL. love how the lion is white and green. cute
"Good grief, Draco..." He reached out and traced the tattoo with the tip of his finger, eliciting a small, startled gasp. "Make sure nobody sees that," he blurted, images of enraged and disgusted Slytherins racing through his mind.

Draco snorted. "Really, do you think? Don't worry, Ron." He dropped his shirt and turned around to embrace him. "I don't know what you do in your free time, but I don't generally parade around pantsless through the dormitories, or in front of my parents."

haha. love how the first thing ron said was that. he didnt even say if he liked it or not LOL


aww I love how ron dresses draco back and plays with his hair. its cute

Draco laughed. "I never thought I'd ever say this, but put your clothes on, Ron.
lol


aww I hate how draco didnt say i love you to


love the story. it was great. sappy. i loved it
Blink'n
2007-01-10 . chapter 1
"silver wraiths of steam escaping from noses and parted lips.", damn but that was a nice bit of writing! I don't know what it is about Ron/Draco slash that makes it so good but what ever it is, there damn sure is plenty of it here!
billy
2006-09-19 . chapter 1
Cute
Lebarcham
2005-08-27 . chapter 1
O.O

I think I'm trembling.

beautiful.
Kelly
2005-03-03 . chapter 1
Ohh so sweet! The ending made me choke up. It starts out as fluff and ends all hopeful angst. I love it.
Naruke
2004-12-31 . chapter 1
So very well written!
Katherine4
2004-12-11 . chapter 1
::melts and tries not to die of charm::

That was incredible. So sweet and ethereal and pretty and just amazing. I love the pure adoration Ron and Draco have for each other. So completely heartwarming.

::adds to favs::

::worships::
Stockholm Syndrom
2004-08-13 . chapter 1
i have never read a draco ron before, and i realised that i'm missing some good slash he he.
Hej Då!
nan williems
2004-07-15 . chapter 1
wow ... someone liked the tattooed seeker!
i love your tat designs! i'm not much of a ron fan, but i can see you draoc/ron being, well, workable.
keep it up baby love
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