please update thise it is a cool story as i hope it not boy/girl though.

aw r u gonna write more this iz a very well written first chap...plz add more

Please continue writing. *startes to cry*

Well, it looks like you've given up on this story. But it's still worth a shot, no? So, if you don't mind, I would appreciate it if you wrote even a short little chapter to end it, as apposed to leaving it like this. It's just too depressing!

next chapter, next chapter, please write the next chapter! :D

this is really good. of course i've said that about all your stories- and its true. keep up the good work.

PWease, continue that story,or everybody will be disappointed.

Oh, poor Serena, she gets all the bad luck. Please continue this one, its lonely, hint hint. *grin*
~*Kon*~

the first chapter has me hooked! please continue! =)

Okay for the past seven months I have been waiting for an update for this story....Please write another one...your work is soooo good!!! There are not that many fics that grab my attention like this one so please write another.

I've read your story a number of times and have always looked for more. Please don't discontinue this story, it's excellent. Please keep writing.

Rosealeena :)

Stargirl~
I love this story. I've read the parts that are up on FanFiction.net and on VioletAttitude and i love it~ i love all your stories! Please~ finish them all!!!!!!!! Good Luck!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! That was sooooo not fair!!! THAT STUPID HOLL-WHATEVER!!! I FEEL SOO MAD~!!! I HATE HER!!! Argh!!
-Cough cough- OKay, I'm done..That was really a great start!(Makes me want to strangle that stuck-up lady!!!!)I really hope you write more!

NOTHER CHAPTER! NOTHER CHAPTER!
NOTHER CHAPTER!

This is a great beginning and I would love it if you continued it. I love your other stories too. I wish I could write as well as you do, but I will have to be satisfied with my mediocre writing style. Anyway, I really would love it if you finished.