| Reviews for Swan Siren |
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Feather 6/13/13 . chapter 28 I recognize the quote from the Hunger Games (movie)! Chapters are amazing, as always. :D |
Feather 6/12/13 . chapter 10 I like the line, "Pique had to admit she found her interest piqued by the idea." And Lillie's "love octagon." I can just imagine her high, mock-lovely voice cooing all those lines! You keep the characters "in-character", and I like that. Fakir vs Femio . . . I really hope Fakir wins! |
LauParisi 6/5/13 . chapter 43The man card was seriously needed at this point! Hilarious! I don't know if it's just because I've been so stressed by the rest of this story recently or what but I was laughing so hard at that point. Excellently placed, now I am going to go wonder how Fakir will receive his man stamps if he's DEAD?! Lovely chapter can't wait until the next one! |
James Birdsong 6/2/13 . chapter 42 Lovely chapter SoSaysL. |
LauParisi 6/1/13 . chapter 42I cried out loud when Femio was stabbed. I know you said that you had character deaths planned but part of be half hoped you weren't serious. That was really intense. This is such a wonderful build of drama and suspense. Wonderfully written! Update soon please! |
VanillaDreamFran 5/31/13 . chapter 42Ah! You used Voldemort's lines from when he visits Quirrell at Azkaban at the end of A Very Potter Musical. I love that scene (made me ship Quirrellmort). And now Mytho will see Fakir with 'Odette' and I can't wait to see how he battles with his having to kill 'Svanna'. I wait expectantly as always for the next chapter. |
inujisan 5/26/13 . chapter 40 tragedy indeed. Rue is finding out the cost of her "wish" |
Princess Ahiru 5/19/13 . chapter 41 Fascinating! Keep updating! XD |
LauParisi 5/19/13 . chapter 41You have a gift. Truly, this is fantastic. My heart was pounding in my ears the whole time. This concept is brilliant but the way you portray it is incredible. I have a sinking suspicion that when Drosselmeyer told her that they'd be together that he meant in death. Its a guess I don't know but I'd really like to know so you should update as soon as possible! |
James Birdsong 5/19/13 . chapter 41 Awesome two chapters. |
VanillaDreamFran 5/19/13 . chapter 41Now we know why Mytho became a badass. This chapter was so powerful, it was awesome! Keep up the great work and I look forward to the next chapter as always. |
inujisan 4/23/13 . chapter 40 oooooh, suspense! And poor Pique. |
LauParisi 4/22/13 . chapter 40HOLY SHIT! YOU NEED TO UPDATE ASAP! |
Mary 4/8/13 . chapter 39 I love reading your story! I read it all in one night! How soon until the next chapter comes out! |
2000msluna 4/1/13 . chapter 39Oh no! Pooe Lillie and Femio! Oh and Mytho is just terrible! But Miss Edel is there now! Yaaay! This chapter was exciting! Luna-chan |