i think in some of the dreams yyou should have cell taunting him or something i mean have cell play some part in this i mean come on he is like the best villan of dbz and also come on gohan vs cell it wont get better than that

I got to chapter 11 and i had to stop.

All Gohan seems to do is cry and its painful to my eyes.

Seriously, you would of thought he would have become cold, heartless after FOURTY FIVE planet kills..

Pff, yet he cry's in EVERY chapter, two in others..

Eughh, i feel sick.

Just reading a weak Gohan fic' makes me have.

i hopw gohan aj andmika have traind over the last 6 years cuss they will nead it.

my gess would be that valas his going to try to take gohan back during that party ofr that day.i hope gohan and the outhers are strong enof to fend off the attack.

very good chapter i liked the part about the legend i wonder what part gohan will play how it will all play out .it is a pitty you stoped writing this fanfict.i would have liked to find pout what would have happened.

so valash has visited this planet and done things before gohan.what kind of m,onbster is she.im glad gohan got out of there

ho knows what valash would have done.

gohan neads to learn to cobntrol his pwoer and aj neads to get stronger i think these 2 can help each outher is they spar together.altho gohan neads to let her hel him first.

i wonder will the link let gohan know about her and vs versa.great story.i haven bean this excoted about a fanfict in a long time.i hope you finish your revised version.

i can understand why gohan wakes up screaming from that nightmare.

i wonder if she will find out more information before she confronts gohan.

i wonder now that gohjan knows that his father has bean looking for him if he will go back to earth.

i hope whene she finds out about what has happened she or the and or the rest of hir family can help gohan threw this.

excelen fanfict it is well written and evrything flows nicly.no skipping of time that we dont knpow what accured or very little.you should be proud of yourself for writting such a good story.

i am wondering how they now about earth do they know what gohan was forced too do.

it wasnt mean it was a good chapter althow i see why you are rewriting it the new version so far fromn the chapters that are up are much better.it portrays gohan and what he might have felt better in the revised version of the story.

what are you talking about! it was utterly amazing, it was even on ,my favporites list! but if you have top re-write it i inderstand, im doing the same with my stories.

good luckhard511jog346