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HI-FI Killer 2/1/03 . chapter 19
poor gohan! *sniff*
stupid kid 04 2/1/03 . chapter 19
first i was hooked on this fic... then it wasn't updated for a while... now i'm hooked on replacement... now both? oh well... it's all good! gohan hurt, yugi hurt (Other fic) How can one not be happy? but i does have to do with the plot (Great!) and the writer!

Why i'm rambling on is beyond me! but i hope mores out soon! (If not then i'm just hoping theres more at all!)
otepoti 2/1/03 . chapter 19
yeye great chapter and a good start as well
Alana Quinn 2/1/03 . chapter 19
That was sooo perfect! It was such a good chapter, and the lyrics of the song fitted in perfectly.

Poor Gohan-declares his love and gets a slap across the face for his efforts.

You are such a gifted writer (apart fom the spelling, hee hee) and i can't wait for your next chapter.

Lol.

gohans-girl :)
Alana Quinn 1/23/03 . chapter 18
I don't think you've got any of my reviews. For some reason they don't send. But i absolutely love your fic. It is definetly one of my favourites. I'm so glad you updated, cos i've been reading right from the start.

Anyways, i thought this was a really good chapter. Great character development.

Please update soon cos i gotta know what happens when Gohan and Aj talk about him losing control.

Lol.

gohans-girl :)
Yami-Kjata 1/21/03 . chapter 18
Dude I love this story so much I just really like the idea of Gohan being taken away.
anon 1/9/03 . chapter 18
MORE MORE MORE! Hurry!
anon 1/7/03 . chapter 18
I thought it was good, ok? anyway update soon,please
danni 1/7/03 . chapter 18
One word to describe this

BRILLIANT!

I have followed it for ages and always will do

Danni
anon 1/7/03 . chapter 18
That is so cool chapter...please continue i wanna to see what happen...
someone 1/7/03 . chapter 1
make more
Softee 1/6/03 . chapter 18
Cool story, the fight scene was cool although gohan needs some serious anger management classes. Nicely written and i can't wait to see what happens next. *gives thumbs up*
Mirai-Xenia 1/6/03 . chapter 18
Hey! I don't know what happened just now...

I pressed backspace on my keyboard and the review screen went to the log in screen...

I don't know if the review I was just writing was sent in or not so I guess I'll just repeat what I said and if there are two reviews, well 'more the merrier' I always say!

Ok...Gohan's lost control in his fight with AJ...I was expecting that to happen since you kept going over his fear of going super saiyan. Or maybe it was a lucky assumption...who knows! Mikia is left out everything...poor girl, she's just worried about her sister...

Anyway, you don't have to apologize about not reading my fic. Don't worry about it. I haven't updated in a while anyway. There's a lot of action in the next chapter and I have a hard time writing that stuff...I feel bad since all my fav. stories were updated and me still nothing since mid-December...maybe things will pick up...

Man! I went off there for a minute or two...

I envy your review count...183 dang why is everyone surpassing me? ::pouts::

I loved the chapter, and don't worry everyone seems to be liking your story. Some helpful morale(sp?) here...

I'll end this review before your eyes start to strain...oh and...UPDATE SOON!(you probably knew I was going to say that _)
Jetforce9000 1/6/03 . chapter 18
Verry good please contunue. I really like your writing. I am going to read your other stuff/
Tabiku Tab Iakkin 1/6/03 . chapter 18
WRITE MORE!

Tabi Chan
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