   Arie of the Dragon Tribe 9/16/06 . chapter 26Update update update!
lol!
this is great please update!
Arie |
| Cayasha 3/29/06 . chapter 26 You have to update! I really want to know what happens! It's really good too ... plz update soon |
| pipa11 1/9/06 . chapter 1 oh please continue! |
| pipa11 11/3/05 . chapter 26 please finish it! please please please please please |
| DFD 10/16/05 . chapter 26 Update |
| jjkim 10/11/05 . chapter 26 Dammit UPDATE! |
| jenny 9/20/05 . chapter 1 JUST FINISH IT ALREADY, IM GOING CRAZY! i want to know what will happen to gohan and aj. and i want to know if gohan will ever return back to earth! |
| dfd 9/15/05 . chapter 26 OH MY GOSH poor gohan-chan you're not going to hurt him and A.J are you? puh-leeze say no cuz i like those two and blah blah blah you're the 50th person's story i've reviewed tonite and i'm tired so i'm gonna say goodbye and i hope you update soon! |
| Honey Nut Loop 9/15/05 . chapter 26 yeyness an update. great. |
| chris 9/15/05 . chapter 26 ok i like the story i really do, heck i even skipped a class to try a finish reading the whole thing, but this last chapter is really getting to me. gohan should have been training in the last few years, heck he should have been ready to get revenge on vanglash or whatever his name is. you should be having gohan kicking there ass from the planet to the moon, but your not, you having him loose again. i knew you were going to have the fight be hard but wow, i'm really at a loss of words for what happened. i know you probably dont like to get flamed or anything, and im sorry that i was maybe a little hard, but i just expected gohan to put up more of a fight. as much as i ranted i really have to say that i cant wait to see what happens in t he next chapter. |
| Sabaku no Zak 9/6/05 . chapter 26 MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE. ok I'm done, GREAT update and I'm getting excited for what's going to happen next, can't wait for another update...nad pleaze update soon _ arigato.
SSGohanStrife |
| A Happy Reviewer 9/5/05 . chapter 26 Wow. Now that what I am talking about! I have not seen that much action since I watched Star Wars last night.
Keep up the good work. I do hope AJ, Gohan and Mikia find a way through this Battle. I beginging to wonder if Gohan sees AJ about to get raped or getting raped that Gohan just loose it. The collar on him blows up and he loose it. Goes wild and beat the shit out of everything that moves. |
| lpgohanfanatic 9/5/05 . chapter 26 Very good. Great job! Poor Gohan...Thanks for updating! |
| otepoti 9/5/05 . chapter 26 0_o oh no
great chapter |
| otepoti 9/4/05 . chapter 25 wo |
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