You're right, this really is a promising beginning. I'm rally curious now who will hijack the boy, what his friends will do about it and how he'll deal with it.

Though I'd suggest you watch your punctuation, it's a bit off in the latter part of the story. :)

I'm looking forward to read the next chapter. :)

great start!

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that almost made me cry. I dunno maybe I'm dilutional. THAT WAS GOOD! *chokes Zero and skips off.* Candy? *mental glare* Hell-oh Gohan.

how do you do mental glare?

*shrugs* I'm a telepath