Awesome story and really original as well hard to know what will happen next, obviously Cas still believes the Elves have killed Eragon (wont he be in for a surprise not only is he alive but his new appearance). Interested in what may transpire between Eragon and Oromis will he receive Rider training and gain some knowledge on what happened to the order, not to mention how much of his past will continue to come to light in his dreams and perhaps most interestingly is how much longer Arya and Eragon can keep there hands off each other.

Until the next one.

this story is so awesome! I have been reading this till 1 am because its so freaking awesome. Its such a great story and SO gripping!
Please update! I am begging you to update soon! Please!

PS update!

Why can your stories not be as you want them? In your bio it says you are eighteen so if you want explicit stories how do your parents force you to stop it? Other than that question, I love your writing. I followed your old stuff daily (just recently got an account though, never felt like I had the need before) and I was literally in tears when I saw FtP taken down. It made me quit FF for 3 months. I am so happy you are re-uploading it though and when I saw the name I was just like "no way. No way no way no way. Thank you dear lord" and now that I've read through all four of the stories, I eagerly await your next update. I check ff at school even now because of you and elemental dragon slayer. So again, thanks for coming back and re-uploading the stories. You just made a fifteen year old extremely happy. And what exactly happened btw if you don't mind me asking? I couldnt find your old account to look at the bio and I always wondered what happened. Thanks again and I am eagerly awaiting the next post -Kaando

AWESOME!
PLEASE update soon
Cant wait for next chapters to come!

Awesome!
PLEASE update soon!
I CANT wait, its too good!
Plz keep it up

Arrow finally started, we have only had 2 episodes. 2! I like it already. I like the suspense so I don't mind waiting, it's what makes it exciting.

Doctor Who is the usual funny, dark and happy self. Clara is cool I like her character, but I liked David's and Christopher's versions of the Doctor better. (The last two)

Fluff is really nice in this chapter but there is so much more you could have done with it. The description of the kissing, feel of their bodies pressed together as they slept, how they slept, you get my point, I would have liked to see more fluff. But that's your decision on how much you want to put in.

I would think that Arya would be even more attracted to Eragon now that he looks like an elf but still retains the features she originally found attractive. Both physically, mentally and emotionally.

Not bad. Please update soon!

Please dont do the arrow to the knee pun in the next chapter. That would suck. Anyways it was a great chapter , I cant wait for the next one.

Cassius, you're in some deep shit now... I just hope he gets out of it before something bad happens.

great chapter. keep it up your doing great

hahahaha eragon trying to jump out of a window xD that was epic :D lol

That was really cool :) I feel really bad for Cass :( can't wait for the next chapter :)

Really good. Can you make the chapters longer?

You should be all like "Hey HO, I can write what I want when I want, now go make me a sandwich." After the year of grounding you can move out and THEN post it. It'll be worth it... for me )

I loved this chapter and it sucks that you can't do any lemons. I thought this chapter was really good and I can't wait to see the sword fight between Eragon and Arya. Would you write a lemon if you could?