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| Reviews for Molten |
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   maijacob 1/7/13 . chapter 1I am very interested in this story please say that you will keep updating. |
| jharv241 8/24/12 . chapter 1 Awesome first chapter can't wait to read more! |
| ihatevampslovewolfs 8/9/12 . chapter 1 Will you make this a story or is it a one shot? |
| yankeerose 8/8/12 . chapter 1 Looking forward to seeing where you take this story |
| momoXvolturi 8/6/12 . chapter 1 damn now thats what i call good first impressions all she gotta say is rise young skywalker and the moment will be complete but anyways good chapter hope you continue |
| Vane3131 8/5/12 . chapter 1 Like it so far . Thank you |
| DarkWhiteRose 8/5/12 . chapter 1 Great start, love it. U did a great job on writing on this story. Keep the great work up. |
| cloudshadow22 8/4/12 . chapter 1 Ok, you definitely have an OOC Bella here if she is naked on the beach. I'm a bit confused by the timing. I think this chapter says that Jake has not yet phased, but I assume that when this was "written down," he did know about the shifters. My favorite line here: "my world suddenly changed and was sucked back through a straw..." |
| JJjr 8/4/12 . chapter 1 This is a very interesting start. I'm curious what happens next... :) |
