it seems you have a good start here

Scott is Draco, yes? Hermoine and Draco being friends? not likely.

I'm NOT continuing this. Sorry.

I like.Write more

That was really nice. I can't wait to see what happens when Hermione sees "Scott" at Hogwarts. Please update soon.

SO cute! Is this goig to be a H/D romance fic or just friendship or what? ^^! Its still cute though. You better update it soon though!

baibai

next chapter ASAP pleez! Great story. luv it.

I really liked it! Scott is really Draco, right?

that is cool. You should continue ~Padfoot

I think leather pants suck.
Anyways,
Go on with the story:)
Nice job!!~!

OOoooOO interesting...*charges into next chapter*

POOR DRACO OOPs i mean SCOTT
Lol n e wazyz plz continue
da story hehehehheh

ooooohh....sounds interesting...'can't wait for that next chappy!

ooooohh....sounds interesting...'can't wait for that next chappy!

That was really good! Keep going nya! Ok... i dont know what the nya was for, it just came out. But thats beside the point? Can I give you some advice? Oh, well, you can't stop me.

When a new person starts talking, start their speech on a new line. It's less confusing for te reader if it's not squashed up in one big paragraph. eg.

"Really? Why do you think that?" He asked.

"Well, that house doesn't look like a house , if you know what I mean. It looks more like a fortress, and-" Just then, she realized she was talking to a complete stranger, and her mother had tol her not to do that.

"Yes? Please continue." He urged her.

... like that.

~Julz~