I enjoyed this chapter, like others before. I was happy when i was 14. chapter.
Im fan of Parris books too. I finished Prophesy days ago. Its sad there arent fanfiction about her books. So many interesting stories which can be write. Or I couldn find them. If you know some would you write their names, please?
Anyway update soon !

Just found this story I love it

I loved it :) so excited to see who the mystery woman is and where Jane is sneaking off to

Ah! I liked this... what will happen now? Anne and Percy... I like it more and more!

Good chapter! I liked the idea of the gifts and I can't wait to see the meeting between Jane and Anne... And then finally there's Henry Percy :) I'm curious...Update soon!

I can't wait to see more I really liked it

Poor Anne, Mary's reputation surely wasn't any good for her... Now I really want to see what happen next!:) Update soon

Okay I think you really need to enhance your conversations, because really it is hard to figured out who is talking to who. And it would be a really neat twist if they were friends, but in the end with they had a falling out or Jane honestly didn't want to be Queen.

\ I suppose if she's quiet I could think.\ That offended me in this fic which bashes Jane a lot.(I thought it'd be friendship) Quiet people are dumb? I'm quiet, and I'm nowhere near dumb.

Oooh I really Liked This chapter :) the strage friendship between Jane and anne intrigues me and so it does the introduction of percy... Update soon :)

Yes you should continue! I'm curious!:) I've always liked Jane above all Henry's wives (even Katherine) but this before I watched the show and made some researches on my own...Now I don't like her: too good to be true...I want to more about her relationship with Anne anyway;)