Flunadubdub
You can't eat VALID reasons...
He's a FxFP fan, ya know.
(Pretty much the same like me, favoring Bunny Bears while fixing incompatibility issues with FxFP but I'LL NEVER SHARE IT :D)
Don't make me fite you, or else...

next chapter i think u should of made a three some relation ship at the end of chap.14!
u suk dick!

suking

Wow,prince gunball just turn from a big pus...ehem...um...a big sissy into a pretty badass guy is a great chapter my friend, full of action, just like olddd adventure time :D,I like it...But all those fire kept reminding me of fp though :(, cant wait 4 her reaction lol (again...)

Very good chapter my friend , I hope Fionna will be fine though...Can't wait for flame p 's reaction when she finds out that they are together well..., atleast finn hasn't completly forgot about fp yet,so im pleased with , take this potato for that ( )

Awwww they kissed and then cuddled in the bed :3 WHICH IS UNACCEPTABLEEE, UNACCEPTA lol just kidding :D , turn out i actually like this pairing , the two last human... To bad this is only a T rated story ;)
i must said that your writting skill have improve A LOT, it is now not only 'fun' to read but also heart-melting, breath-taking , mind-blowing and ummm...fun-to-read story :3

U SEE? It is so so much better now . I'm now half sad half happy because you did improve your writting, and i am sad cuz those advices on my latest review just went down the shithole becuz it was for FRICKING NOTHING!SOOO I'm not gonna give out any advices now because it is... well u know ...pointless...
Soo this is actually a bunny bear story eh ( yes i did read ur bio) I dont really like any gender swap characters of at though .IM A PURE RIGHTOUS FLAME SHIPPER! But perhap u could change my view about fionna, which is kinda cute in this chapter ;)
since u've finnished thjs story i fell like im talking to my self (or maybe a dead guy)
good story bro, im very positive about how this is going( again i fell like im talking to myself )

Hey homie, I really really love finnxfp , soooo I was kinda mad and sad when I read the end of the story (b4 reading the a/n) .I was like wth? ,did he wrote this chapter just to KILL fp and get rid of her so finn and fionna could be together?. Men I was so mad I could go to ur house and kill u ( which is kinda a easy task for me ;) ) lol jk but anyway, here is my review as a reader to a author : 1st of all too many '*' , u should make the story flow naturely u know, 2nd you shouldn't said: Ice king : blah blah blah... . It is more like a story if it was like : 'blah blah blah' said the ice king seductively.
Overall, this story is a fun story to read,too soon to judge about the plot though, I've only read chap 1 xD

The most cheesiest story i have ever read. Girl, you made cry real hard! Thats what i call a real romance there!

Huh I wanted flame princess to get in a friggin rage and kill that ugly bitch Fionna your ending fucking sucks I am a FPxFinn fan and this story is motherfucking shit you are a badass writer

The song is Dream of love

I prefer fionna kissing finn

Fiona rellay Dead She was my fav charecter

Nice man can't wait.

The song is dream of love sang by tree trunks and pig on my favorite episode.