The emotions in this are well written, with excellent descriptive phrases. The images are brilliantly portrayed, and one feels that one is, momentarily, in the character's mind. Beautifully done!
...Thank God that her name wasn't really Salsa. Darn import games! I hated her "real" name and I hated her accent. If-a only I coulda known-a that before!
Crisis Haylo 2002-07-19 . chapter 1
This is very good! Makes me wonder why nobody has reviewed such a wonderful Faris fic!!! Aaaah! I love it so much makes me wanna see more, hehehehe! It's very good! You should write more FFV fics!