|Reviews for Beneath this Sky|
| TessLouise 5/21/13 . chapter 18
Oh, geez - I'm stressed, but it's SO GOOD. I'm not over Jessica...just, seriously, the best fic Jessica ever (and we won't even compare her to canon Jessica because canon Jessica blech!)
| AbstractSong101 5/20/13 . chapter 18
FINALLY getting a chance to read this. Holy crap. I have been suffering withdrawl symptoms knowing that it's here and I havent had a chance to read!
OMG two chapters and an epi. I will cry when this is over. For real.
"She'd wanted to love him—the kind, lonely doctor who had become her dearest friend."
Oh, Rose :( And Poor Carlisle.
"And that had been it. "
"Not that different, then," Edward said with a wink.
LOL I love him.
"Chesterton practically had its own Carlisle Ogling Society."
I AM FORMING A BRANCH HERE.
"Or, in our case, a substitute child."
I wasn't expecting that at allllllllll!
Gah, this story is incredible.
Awwwwwwwwwww Garrett. I feel so, so terrible for him.
"Rose is wrong," he said. "I'll still feel the same. I know I will. I'll tell you after we've changed, just to prove it."
Oh god. This review has been terrible, I was all flaily. Lol.
Loved it, excited for the next one. You know I love this story so much.
Thank you for writing :)
| NKubie 5/19/13 . chapter 18
Well, at least I wasn't 100% wrong on my theories, though not even close when it came to Emmett. I did guess the reason that they wanted to "turn back the clock" was so that Rose wouldn't be a vampire and also that she had a huge crush on Carlisle. However, how they went about it was nothing that even crossed my radar.
It really is a lot to take in, but I can see how Bella is torn. So much bad has happened, but also good has come from it. How to you reconcile those feelings? Well, she and Edward will have a long time to go through therapy, (couple's and not) so maybe over time they'll be able to resolve some of it.
Regardless, I love the idea that B&E will become vamps at the same time. Please don't let anything go wrong and don't let their feelings for each other change. Well, they can get stronger. I'm cool with that. :)
I'll be looking forward to the next chapter, though I'm sorry it's all coming to a close. It will be a nice birthday treat.
| FenixMJR 5/17/13 . chapter 18
Damn, that is a lot to take in, can't wait for the next chapter
| Rochelle Allison 5/17/13 . chapter 18
oh, wow. so it was rose. i can't be upset with her either; she couldn't have known.
and now, edward and bella's change. i look forward to seeing how this will manifest.
| Lilith Leazman 5/16/13 . chapter 1
Wow, I have to say, you've got a gift. Just reading your Prologue and you immediately had me hooked. I'm really excited to read your story.
| shehazi 5/15/13 . chapter 18
| mmsinful 5/15/13 . chapter 18
I love this story. I've read it in one go and lost hours of sleep. I love how different the world is. It is very imaginative and I can't wait to continue reading what ever else you come up with.
| jansails 5/14/13 . chapter 18
I had an idea the Surge had something to do with Rose.
Rose was never really in love with Carlisle, she was infatuated & thrilled to the chase, the competition of "winning" him over her competitors, so it is no wonder those feelings did not turn into the vampire equivalent of mates after her change.
I believe ExB will find their feelings are enhanced, deepened by the transformation to vampires.
| Purradox 5/14/13 . chapter 18
Short but powerful sweetie! It gives you loads to think on, yeah. I wouldn't know what to think if she told me that. Understanding is what is like to be but selfish would probably be the word spewing from my mouth. Well done honey. Update soon.
| songster 5/14/13 . chapter 18
Resolving the conflict 101: see Bedelia. LOL. This was very well done and amazingly well constructed. I know just how hard it is to create a sci-fi plot and this worked beautifully. That it also included romance was the cherry on top. I can't even hate Rose here and I nearly always do. ;)
| luvstwilight4ever 5/13/13 . chapter 18
Great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
| LoveMeSomeAngst 5/13/13 . chapter 18
Oh, man. I'm seriously nervous and really stressed that this is almost over.
| Cullenosopy 5/13/13 . chapter 18
Wow, this story is so original, with twists and turns that are wonderfully unpredictable. There are some that are tragic, too.
I'm scared of the possibility that somehow either Bella or Edward might not be turned.
| AnjieNet 5/13/13 . chapter 18
Wow, the guilt Rosalie has had to shoulder for so long. Carlisle too as he figured out how to harness the power.