Well? Where's the rest of this? You can't just leave us here, and surely your laptop was fixed long ago. So where are these extra chapters you boast of?

This is lovely. I don't know if you'll see this review, but it is nicely written, with good characterization and hopefully some lemons to come...

Please, please, will you finish this, been a wonderful read so far, really want to know what happens next!

Will you be continuing this story at all?

Because it really is awesome and I've read it like three times over and I'm exicited to see if Jareth will ever be loved by Sarah and will Sarah ever be loved by Jareth. It is an epic concept as theres really no escape for Sarah, so even if she wanted to hate Jareth she couldn't if she wants to live.

I can emphaise with your computer problem, but it seems like we've all waited a long time, so please update!

I absolutely love this story. I love the idea of Jareth as a Fae. Your Jareth is so sexy and I love the whole concept. I also adore your writing style.

I absolutely love this story! I've read so many the Labyrinth fanfics since I saw the movie a few weeks ago, but none can compare to this one. This fic is definitely so much more different than any others and I absolutely love dark Jareth.
I really hope you update soon! This story is great. :)

I love this! I hope your computer gets fixed soon :)

I found this story after reading your one-shot. I dearly hope your laptop situation works out (I would know just how much it sucks, I finally got my new one two days ago and I have been without one for a year now!) I am looking forward to what you have written so far!

P.S. Don't apologize for the fluffiness or the darkness, the glorious thing about writing is that it is your creation- write as you darn well please! So if someone does critique you for having a moment or two of softness in an apparently dark fic, don't pay attention to them!

I just happen to come across your story and I have to say I do not mind a Dark Jareth can be fun and Love the story I can not wait for more!

I'm sorry to hear your laptop broke, on the bright side it's supposed to be fixed by now- yay for finding fics a few months after other people have read them!

She seems very quick to accept his proposal, I wonder if she's thought it through... even if she loves him completely, she's only really spent a few days with him- hardly long enough to commit for life!

Sleeping on it is sensible, I'm glad she's learning! Just one note on your writing, Jareth used the exact phrase that Sarah found in the book- I think it'd be unlikely for him to quote when explaining bonding to Sarah, as it's a normal part of his life and unlikely that he had to read the same thing she did. Other than that, intriguing characters!

He thinks that was going well?

Wonderful beginning, I like how he accepts that Sarah is selfish and has flaws rather than idolizing her

Too bad for this fic...deep sixing a good one sucks for all of us.

R