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| hermoine04 2005-09-02 ch 2,  | abusei like this almost the sameas the first one but personilised.. |
| hermoine04 2005-09-02 ch 1, | abusehey this is a great story..very intimate and detailed.. BuBbLeS |
| Chid 2004-01-24 ch 3, | abuseI love it. It was so cute. As I read the sentence: "Because it knew you." I screamed "Aw" and now my parents think I am crazy, but it was really worth it. Keep writing. |
| karin 2003-04-20 ch 3, anon. | abuse*Eyes shut softly* *Lips form a contented smile* *Cheeks a delicate rose* *Karin a picture of perfect momental bliss* Nice, indeed... |
| jeswin 2003-04-16 ch 3, anon. | abuseOh, I liked that! I liked that very much! I liked the idea of Remus changing early and Sirius having to come up with another alternative to the Shrieking Shack in a hurry. And I liked that Sirius had to change back to keep James and Peter from opening the door and that the wolf didn't harm him. The joint dreams were well described and beautiful as well. Very nice! |
| stellar 2003-04-16 ch 3, anon. | abuselovely! Im not sure how the specifics of the transformation would work, but all the other stuff was great. cute but without the excessive fluff that makes me hide my face. you get a red star. |
| ever 2003-04-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseHi!!I'm italian, but i read this fanfition and I love it!Please...write a sequel!It's so beautiful, i love Sirius/Remeus!Yours EveR sorry for my bad english |
| LadyBush 2003-04-16 ch 3, | abusePerfect. There isn't a lot more I can say :) |
| LadyBush 2003-04-16 ch 2, anon. | abuseV. well-written- what wonderful dreams! Anyways, I haven't read the third chapter yet (tea time right now) but when I do you might get a longer review. It's great! On my favourites list if I actually log in... LadyBushxx |
| AJ 2002-08-20 ch 2, anon. | abuseI can't wait to hear more ^_~! This is a very interesting story! -AJ |
| Val Mora 2002-08-15 ch 2, | abuseHalf the fun of writing is finding out what others think! ^_^ I really like this! And I especially like all the description in the dreams; I love the plot, too - it's not cliche at all, though you took a relatively common premise (dreams about someone). If you're going to continue this, please do so! |
| Morien Alexander 2002-08-13 ch 2, | abuseWay cute!!! I really enjoyed these chapters and wish that I had such lovely dreams as those.... but waking up... *sob* that's gotta be the hardest part. |
| Kiyomisa 2002-08-11 ch 2, | abuseI like the drearms ^-^. I can't wait for more. |
| magical me 2002-08-08 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis is a really original idea. I love the way you describe the dreams -- it sounds so much like a dream-state: 'Why haven't you shown me this when we were both awake' (paraphrased) sounds just like the sort of thing you would say in a dream. The only suggestion I'd have to make it better would have been to split off the dream-part (in the first person) from the Sirius pov part (third person). Otherwise, it's great. I'm looking forward to the next part. |
| Lunard 2002-08-08 ch 2, | abusethis fic need another chapter! *short nod* *grin* It was wonderful. I do want to know how Remus will tell Sirius and how they both will react and everything. please a third one! |