I love the BA and HAnnibal were talking about the rest of there team. And about getting Face.

Yep, have to agree with what the other's said - the opening paragraph description is great, and the straight forward dialogue nails both BA and Hannibal.
The slang use was just right, seamlessly integrated and didn't feel forced (like those stories where you know the author is trying to jam in everything they found on a website)
Can't wait to read on!

I hope you are the same one who has a slew of VC stories that I'm trying to read...IN ORDER... *le sigh* You do such a marvelous job of bringing the jungle and the setting to life. Just awesome.

This was an excellent storyline. Just finished reading it today.

I just re-read hte entire series and it never ceases to amaze me what a wonderful story the two of you have written! Just wondering...any further chapters planned?

Thank you I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, I am looking forward to the next instalment. I can invisage this as the way things might have started.

That was awesome!! I can imagine them starting the Team that way. I can't wait to see the rest of this series!! Keep up the groovy work!
~*Visage*~

Good start! Love the imagery in the first few paragraphs. You definitely have talent! Keep going!

Hi,
I really like the story very much so far- don't let us wait too long for chapter two! I'm really looking forward to how the meeting of Hannibal and Face goes... ! Great work!

Terrific! This is one of the best "beginnings of the A-Team" stories I've read in four years. In particular, I like the way you've captured the characters simply through their dialogue. Thanks very much for sharing this.