Good story

Loved the ending xD

It was awsome, dont let people get you down!

Argh, James, why must be you be such a tease to Severus?

Glad to see Snape can hold his own though, even after being Frenched.

lol, sweet! Im really glad he only kissed james!

Do you know what I do when I read a story I don't like? I hit the back button. If illiterate nonmembers would do the same then we wouldn't have an issue with flames. I added this to my favorites a long time ago but declined to comment for no other reason than pure laziness but after reading your previous reviews I decided you deserve more credit for what you wrote.

Perhaps, now that the series is done, it is not cannon. Perhaps it is a coupling that is not very plausible and perhaps Sirius, Remus, James, and Severus were not gay but we authors write on a website called FANFICTION dot NET. If anything written on this site were plausible then it would have been in the original book/comic/cartoon/anime/movie/tvshow/ . . . and so on.

We write in the realm of the unlikely and read there too.

Some of those flames were probably written by authors who didn't want to login to comment or who don't actually have an account on the site. Long story short, they have no idea what they are talking about and shouldn't be taken seriously. You wrote a quirky, humorous story that was in character as far as anyone other than JK herself can tell.

As I said at the beginning of this unnecessarily long and uncalled for rant, don't like it? Hit the back button and read something else.

You wrote something creative that respected, as far as I can tell, proper grammar skills and spelling. A comment done with such insultingly bad English skills should not have been posted unless English was not their first language and then it should have been stated so. They also should have had the guts to post their email addresses so as to recieve any opinions on their opinions.

Sorry this is so long but you shouldn't have to put up with this irresponsible behavior, none of us authors should. What do any of you flamers know about writing?

i knew someone doing something naked was going to be in there somewhere. i mean, not many dont say that.

awesome and totally funny ]

xx shadow xx

Fun

Short, sweet, and totally adorable.

GAHH!

that was cute _

i love jpss _

Hilarious

Hee hee hee, now why was this flamed again? Lol, I found this absolutely hilarious, I can't find anything wrong with it. I mean, maybe it's just because I'm biased, or because it's late, or actually, now, it's because I happen to think the Mauraders were gay, with the exception of Peter Pettigrew, who I'm convinced should die, dammit why didn't Crooshanks get him when it had the chance?

No, but really, this was a very entertaining read, it is actually kind of refreshing seeing an innocent yet devious portrayal of Snape, instead of the whiny abused one that drives everybody mad. It could just be that I think you stuck to their characters very well, but then once again it could just be because it's late, but either way, FABULOUS JOB!

And Kayli, ((I Pray I got that right, I'm working from memory at the moment)) I doubt you'll ever read this, but either way, I think that what needs to be said to you has been said by fellow reviewers, but I must ask, how old are you? It is not meant to be insultive or derogitory((Sp?)), But seriously, that was sophmoric and shameful.

TO THE AURTHOR: MAGNIFICENT JOB! I Hope to read more of your works in the future, but at the moment, I'm going to bed. Thanks for the good send off into sleep, keep it up!

Before i start on the actual critiquing of your fan fiction i cant help but comment on some of the reviews you have recieved.

First, i would love to thank 'JWizB' for showing that (im assuming JWizB is female) she has a brain! And likes to use it too! Now you may be thinking my god, dont most people have brains? But right now we're not dealing with people, we're dealing with morons who have hacked up the English language to portray their juvenile hatred. Spiffy no?

Second, i just have to point out that 'Kalyi' is an idiot. Nothing more or for her sake lets hope nothing less. Im not going to spend too much time on her though sinch JWizB has done an amazing rebuke already. However, 'FuckYou' has no tact and shows their distate in a vulgar and less than adequate way. Congratulations, you just swore and it was completely unnecessary. I mean honestly, right now im seething at your stupidity to even write something like this but do you see me writing down words like "Fuck You"? Ah but enough of me, back to you! Im SO happy you know how the word LOBOTOMY (the correct spelling right there for you.) Dont you feel special? Now instead of swearing youre using cruel insults. Tsk tsk, didnt your mother tell you if you dont have anything nice to say dont say anything at all! For shame. Oh, now heres my personal favourite part of your...review. Raederle is a "dumbass" because she made Severus a year younger than James and the rest? Oh my god. You my friend would be the dumbass, for the site we are currently on is a fan FICTION site. Fiction is a literary work which content is produced by imagination and is not necessarily based on fact! Well go figure.

Now that ive finished my little tirade (which i thoroughly enjoyed writing, and i apologise for taking up so much room.) i would like to congratulate you on writing a cute, quick and humourous read. The way you portrayed the characters was adorable and witty, you just have to love an ackward and yet devious Severus. Not to mention im quite biased to this couple. Well done Raederle, i sincerely hope you continue to write. And i absolutely adore your other Harry Potter stories.

So in conclusion, i cant wait to see more works from you and please, continue to piss people off like 'Kayli' and 'FuckYou' for i take immense pleasure in rebuking their less than witty insults.

- B

Don't stop are you carzy this is auch a good story! plez hurry and continue

great job, keep writing

levotatingT-Tiff

This was fun! - Very good for a laugh!

And as for those flamers! - Lighten up, will you? I mean, come on, number one, you're reading about a GAME; number two, so what if they _are_ gay; number three, if you don't like it/have anything good to say, don't read or review it!

Anyway, this was very humourous; definitely good to read when you've had a sucky day.

Really enjoyable, except, they're all in the same year. You made it seem like James and Co. were a year older.

Yes, Snape was adorable in this!