moreeeee

keep up the good work

i don't understand anything... will be much better going to a school and learning to write

This is kinda neat, compared with the first chapter :D

Im a great fan of goosebumps,
so waiting for you next update..

Done with your first chapter :)
It was pretty tough to read it in one go. I mean the way you wrote everything in one single passage.
Otherwise, It's a great work. :)

it was a good story but very complicated but it was good