please keep going with this story, its pretty good, and id like to know the end of it. thanks

why is chapter 4 repeated?

I cant believe you left it like that! I know its been FOREVER since the last update...but I hope you plan on finishing this one day =D...soon

hhee holy crap...kinda weird...but reallie koolie! hehe hope u update soon! plz plz do!! ^-^

I like it! But I've got a question. Why'd you post the fourth chapter twice? i noticed that.
It's a really intriguing story though. Can't wait till you update.
keep writing!
Ja ne!

um whats with the double chapter?

unfortunantly i have to go to bed but i will finish this awsoma story. this is very cool. untill tomorow

ohh la la ( i have been saying that alot lately) but this is heating up

Wee! Where's the rest of the story? Huh? I like this story and I hope you write more on it, like, NOW. This or 'Tears of the Moon', k? It's unfair to your readers to just leave them hanging for a long time. It's a very bad trate ::nods head matter-of-factly::. Listen to me. Saying that makes me the biggest hypocrite ever. Next to my mom that is. Love you Mom! Ahem! Again, your style of writing is easy to read except for some cluttered and confusing parts that are hard to read. Other than than, you don't really miss anything.

this is really neat. i like the story. please continue

Lovin the suspense! This story has my mind reeling tryin to figure out what the hell's gonna next. Please finish!

Ohhhh! i love this one too! i havr read one L.J and loved it! Kendra!!!! the panther shapeshifter *sigh* that's the one i read, but anyway really great! once i get the chance i will definitely read more and look at your other stories thst look really interesting! I'll be back!
^o^

Who is it? Please update quickly...

Don't you dare torture us with the waiting. What's next? WHAT IS NEXT?...

That was great..I love L.J.Smith books..hadn't read the Night World in a long time *sigh* I miss it..but it was wonderful to see the idea in a ficcie..I enjoyed it and cannot wait for more.