It's actually pretty sad that Ringo's the only one who hasn't slept with Holly yet.. XD don't you like Ringo? You don't feature him very much, which I feel is a shame because I love Ringo. He was always very sweet. He cheated on Maureen when she cheated on him with George (of all people - John was mad as shit at George; called it practically incest) and even when a few years later they divorced, they stayed friends. When she died in the 1990's from leukemia he was there with her.
I always thought that said a lot about Ringo..

Your chapter brightened my day... Well, night.
The first random though of mine came when it said 'past The Point of No Return' and in quietly began singing Phantom of the Opera to myself.
The next was when it said 'Holly McFarlane's POV' I misread it and thought it said Holly McLennon, and sat here and laughed for a couple of minutes.(then laughed more when I realised I'd been stupid and misread it)
Next: yeah, I talk to myself to, but I don't care if someone is around or not. I'm hardly home alone, I just get weird looks from my family...
Then when John said 'that was then this is now' it reminded me I needed to look for that book (by S.E. Hinton) I've read it, but I want to buy it.
And then the Beach Boys reference, I listened to them all day today :)

Now, onto words about the chapter. I love this chapter because of the way you portray John. I just got finished reading an article by Yoko about John's last days (from Rolling Stones magazine late December 2010 issue) and the way you portray him here is pretty much how she described he acted around her, always encouraging her and having that 'keep your head up' kind of attitude. You've done very well with that.
I also like the only thing Ringo says: "I wonder how many cups of tea we've drank."

Ok, sorry about the lengthy review. Just had to say all of this!

That was a well good chappy! I can see that parts of it were a little like 16 but I thought you built off that and made this chapter its own, you know? Anyway great stuff - I really wanna know how john'll react sooo keep updating!
-Mrs g

Well that is sure to cause some kind of problem. I'm sure.

And who would hate that chapter? It's wonderful.
And George. Aww

I loved it!

I'm glad I'm not the only one who threatens to kill people with spoons...

Hahaa I laughed my ass off when she pulled ciggerettes out of the pockets in her dress! Brilliant! Aha :) and the ending wa a great too, with the song and all :) keep updating!
- Mrs g

You split it up? How could you? Now we wait... (Waiting...) haha.

It was wonderful. I'm glad Paul finally realises that him and Holly could never work out. But, y'know, even though this isn't a 'dramione' fic, you can't help but feel a bit bad for Paul.
Oh well, life goes on!

Loved it (as usual)

'one of the last times that the Beatles ever saw each other in good spirits'
Well, obviously something is going to happen...

And I like how you compare Paul-Holly to Dramione. Haha.

Great chapter
(Don't think I'm just saying that because I always say that. I really do enjoy every chapter!)

Hey :) I liked the story a LOT. I think it's the best beatles fic I have ever read but I have to admit, I really don't like parts of stories when I group of girls get paired with a group of boys. And guest is right, It is kind of a cliché, so I hope you do something about that. Anyways, keep on writing and update soon. xx

I used to love this story but I just, ship Paul-Holly so bad it's insane. And the whole Laura-Paul thing with Morgan-George is just cliche for me. Sorry, you're an amazing writer and I love your stories, but I really dislike these last two chappies. Sorry :(

Love love loved it. It's nice to see Paul and George getting themselves some girls! The chapter was great!

Loved the chapter! Love how you brought Lauren and Morgan back!

And you're editing older chapters? Yay! Gives me a reason to go back and read them :)

Yay! Happy chapter! :)

I love coming home to find my email telling me this story has been updated :)
I loved the chapter, and John's proposal was hilarious!
Paul getting a girl? *gasp* that's unheard of (in most the stories I read, anyway)
Excited for the next chapters!

It's still awesome! :)