Ok, so there are obviously a few things you need to know before continuing this.
1.) I have read this book before and you are using the exact same plot and you are even stealing lines from the story so you MUST tell what book it is from and tell who the author is, if not- that is plagiarizing.
2.) Check your grammar and spelling
3.) Write longer chapters to keep you audience entertained.

really like it its really good! ;{P

Lovin the plot keep the chapters coming may I suggest you do a new release ever other week kinda like what I do for my "the other story" book

i like it just keep a eye on spelling/grammer and stuff like that oh and if its a certain persons POV then dont use their name in it you did that with Chases POV and the first part of Zoey POV other than that good job! ;{D

I love the si-fi plot, keep at it. What book was it that you read

Please review xx