I like this it's fun. And interesting to get Scud's perspective.

Nice story. And very funny, I laughed a lot.

yea, that was really cute! so do your tips really work? this was nice, have you written anything longer? maybe with some adventure and drama?

This is an awesome story idea. I mean, who better to give seduction techniques than Lucy Diamond herself (despite her own game being the slightest bit off)?

And the triangle technique? HOT. (unless it's Scud apparently...poor guy)

I don't normally read much of Scud/Janet, but this is too cute to not reread once in awhile. Thanks for sharing! :)