|Reviews for The First Real Date|
| Anon 6/14/13 . chapter 7
4 to 5
| jcarter920 6/7/13 . chapter 7
I enjoy your writing. Something I find interesting is you really let the reader know the thoughts going through a character's head, and not just one character but multiple characters. It gives a deeper meaning to the dialogue. Keep writing!
| LittleAnnie1 3/30/13 . chapter 2
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| Guest 10/4/12 . chapter 2
This is an awesome story. I like it so far.
| BellaItaliana93 9/6/12 . chapter 8
Wow, pretty graphic ending, but the story itself was really good!:) Can't wait to read your next stories!:)
| kelli maguire 9/6/12 . chapter 8
I liked this story a whole lot, and I like the concept of your new plot for another story. Maybe for an idea Lennox and Ryder can lie to Mel and Lie to Joe and have them meet somewhere, and Idk. I need to think of better ideas lol. Hope to see your new story in the future :)
| Blakley 8/31/12 . chapter 7
2 sounds great! Thus is a great story. Please keep writing.
| rosemusic20 9/1/12 . chapter 7
if you wanted to. You could probably end it right now. Although if you did decide to continue, i would keep reading
| Guest 8/28/12 . chapter 7
Love scene. 2 or maybe 3.
| BellaItaliana93 8/28/12 . chapter 7
Loved the chapter. It was different than most stories, too. Keep up the good writing. can't wait to read the rest of the chapters. :) As far as your question, on a scale of 1-5, I would say a 3. :)
| fandomwriter101 8/28/12 . chapter 7
Nice chapter:) if you choose to write a love scene yeah I would make it a 2 like you said and keep it on the romantic side :) update soon
| Kate1406 8/28/12 . chapter 7
| kelli maguire 8/28/12 . chapter 7
I like it at maybe a four or five just because I totally love love scenes, and also there really aren't any of them in ppls stories. whatever you feel is best though. I support whatever you decide. Loved this chapter so far. Update asap :)
| fandomwriter101 8/27/12 . chapter 6
LOVE IT! Keep going please:))
| Julileini 8/25/12 . chapter 6
Oh my God, I really like your story a lot. This chapter was just awesome, even if it's a bit cheesy. :)
I'm looking forward to the next one!