Heehee... i love this fic. Will you please do a chapter where Byakuya spanks Renji and Ichigo for being so dumb? Please? For me?

A story about Rukia spanking Jinta and Ururu... Wow, this is really dark! Originally, I thought this was going to be a humor fic, but gee, I sure was wrong!

The thing that blared out the most to me was Rukia. This spanking business seems a bit... uncharacteristic of her. It's true that Rukia often hits Ichigo, but it's not in the abusive manner she employed on the Urahara Shop kids. She's a character of reason, so I'm sure she wouldn't consider following the example of the black notebook (Hehe, the first thing that came into my mind was the "Death Note" when I read "black notebook." I guess, it'd be called the "Spank Note" in this situation? XD) Knowing Rukia, she'd probably reason with the kids.

Plus, it's a little strange for Urahara to be spanking Jinta and Ururu. Remember when Ururu accidentally mixed up the products, thus giving Rukia the mod soul otherwise known as Kon? Well, she apologized to Urahara, and he graciously forgave her. From what we've seen in the canon material, Urahara's not a punishing person. He's also reasonable; in fact, he's pretty outgoing. (Otherwise, Hiyori would think twice about disrespecting him when she was his lieutenant back during the Turn Back the Pendulum arc! ;D)

Well, I'm one for darker stories. Maybe all this character change is part of the plot! I'm really interested in where this is going to go. Maybe the spanking problem will improve, and the characters will realize how traumatizing it is for the kids. Good luck!