|Reviews for Moving on Without You|
| Elly Fair 5/19/13 . chapter 20
Really like this chap, by the way I'm a new reader of this fic, but I guess I didn't read as fast I used to.
I really liked where this story going to, you took the myth as your back story, so it was kind of a bit challenging y'know a fight against a god. I also like the romance part tehee.
I'm really happy when you bring back Hope to the story, I was really sad if Hope just die like that in the beginning of the story, while I bet there are still chapters waiting. I'm going to miss him I thought, but I guess Hope will always be there.
I'll be looking forward for the next chapter! :)
| Lilybriar of PondClan 5/6/13 . chapter 20
Make that 43 reviews! Love your story and White Noise, too! Can't wait for the next chappie!
| zerostar88 5/6/13 . chapter 20
It really sucks that we learned the cure spell can't fix blood loss during one of the earlier chapters because she could really use some healing magic right about now. I hope you aren't gonna kill off Serah after you saved her in this story. I'm not sure if Noel is going to be furious or in shock at the start of the next chapter but things aren't looking to good at the moment.
That being said it's interesting that you managed to bring Hope back into the story, but I'm not sure how much help he is going to be when he is stuck in a different realm.
Also should you decide to turn 2 chapters into 20 you wont hear me complaining ;)
| zerostar88 5/6/13 . chapter 19
Wow! You did really well at capturing Vanille's mannerisms, and I really like your back story. It should be interesting to see where things go from here.
| zerostar88 5/6/13 . chapter 18
"hard" T, borderline M...oh come on. You know you want to up the rating :)
I like how Noel and Serah were thinking ahead a little in regards to why Vanille and Fang had awoken. And I suppose if Noel didn't know anything about the two girls then he is about to. Though I wonder how well they would get along? I'm guessing they would get along pretty well since all three of them grew up on pulse when it was difficult to survive on it.
I can't help thinking that Vannille and Fang just cant catch a break when it comes to the Fal'Cie. They go through a huge ordeal, sleep 500 years, then they have to deal with another Falcie when they wake up. It's like those two are trapped in a vicious cycle.
| g 5/6/13 . chapter 20
You sure do love your cliffhangers! Awesome chapter - I was on the edge of my seat! Keep it up :)
| FallenAngelitz 5/3/13 . chapter 20
You know, I thought it was Snow in the last chapter. Turned out to be Hope, much better. I expect awesomeness to increase.
Fifty, huh? :)
| g 4/22/13 . chapter 19
Can't wait to see what happens next! Hope to see the next chapter soon :)
| Lemonsnaps 4/2/13 . chapter 19
This is really really good you know. Can't wait until the next update!
| jesi ki kage 3/26/13 . chapter 19
AAWWW! the Fu**! cliffhangers are not very nice. -poutie face- Really interested, guessing that's Lightning, assuming the parts I don't understand will be further explained, so over all- PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON! Thank you for this update, defiantly increased the suspense. -JKK
| cloudnine 3/25/13 . chapter 19
No only a few more chapters:-( we were just getting started. Great story thankyou so much for updatin faifthfully. I will continue follloiwing. I'm one of those crazy pple who adore long epic stoeies20 chp plus so write till your hearts content
| zerostar88 3/24/13 . chapter 17
First off, I loved the scene with Noel and Serah. The confession and the passion was great and I love how they were in their own little world; completely oblivious to the people making noise upstairs. It's just too bad their passionate moment got interrupted after all this time, poor Noel definitely didn't seem ready to stop. I guess those two will have to hold in their urges until they can find some alone time again. If their interrupted moment is any indication then it should be pretty intense when they pick up where they left off. I'll definitely look forward to it :)
Maybe it's just me but I think it would be an interesting twist if we learn somewhere down the road that Vulcan ended up being the one who made Snow into a l'Cie. After all, we don't know WHO gave Snow all that power or what the focus they demanded of him was. And his new focus could ultimately make him an obstacle to deal with in later chapters.
Anyways, thanks for continuing to share this great tale with us.
| 16afoster 3/16/13 . chapter 1
This is an amazing story. Can't wait till the next chapter.
| Crush-Chan17 3/6/13 . chapter 7
Welllll, I don't know how to feel about this chapter. I was happy until Hope died. Dx Man, that was so uncalled for. Gah. But this story is good. I'm just sad for Hopey-poo. The Ash guy really cracked me up, "Gotta catch 'em all!" Haha. Wonderful Pokemon reference.
| Crush-Chan17 3/6/13 . chapter 4
I loved the ending of this chapter with the brief sparring scene followed by a bonding conversation. xD